Reviewer: Ithinkrabis2people
Date: 08/19/11 14:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is hysterical! Poor Remus, I don't blame him for being confused! And I love the idea of Moody's eye being knocked out - I can imagine that would change the fight somewhat... Great fic, lol :)

Reviewer: Marauder_Chicken
Date: 11/25/10 5:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHAH! This was so ridiculously funny! Well done, I enjoyed reading this.

Reviewer: Harper Potter
Date: 08/30/10 11:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

XD Pwnsomely hilarious. This is the first story I've read when Sirius isn't OOC or AU. I laughed thrice. ^^

Author's Response: Excellent! I'm so glad you found my story funny--and loved my version of Sirius in it. I had way too much fun writing this. :) Thanks for the review--and I'm so sorry I was so late in responding!

Reviewer: hogwartsbookworm
Date: 07/08/10 13:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was funny!

It really really reminded me of a story I used to love when I was little. "The Day Jimmy's Boa Ate the Wash."

It's about these kids on a field trip to a farm and one of them gets home afterwards and tries to explain what happened to his mom.

Have you ever read it?

It was a little incoherant at places but then Sirius seems a bit loopy, so that was alright.

Anyway, good job!

Author's Response: Actually, this was based on the "Jimmy's Boa". :) And you're the first person to mention that book in a review! I teach kindergarten, and I hear a lot of stories told in this manner. One day, I thought of "Jimmy's Boa" after trying to work through a conversation with one of my students, and the next thing I know, I was wondering, "What if Sirius sometimes did that? And Remus had to try to figure out what he was talking about?" And voila! This story was born! Thanks for letting me know I succeeded in paying homage to that story (and to the style of story telling)! (Sorry I'm a 'little' late in responding!)

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 06/16/10 22:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

LOL I like, I like =]

Author's Response: Sorry It's taken me so long to respond! I don't know how I missed this! I'm glad you liked my story--and thank you so much for letting me know you liked it!

Reviewer: MidnightIndigo
Date: 02/22/10 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

That completely made my Monday.

"He wondered briefly if this conversation would be easier to follow if he were drunk.". That line absolutely killed me! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you found that line funny--I've made that comment several times to my aide after hearing some of the things that my kindergarten students ramble about. :) Thanks for taking the time to review--I so very much appreciate it. (Sorry I was so long in responding, though!)

Author's Response: I'm glad you found that line funny--I've made that comment several times to my aide after hearing some of the things that my kindergarten students ramble about. :) Thanks for taking the time to review--I so very much appreciate it. (Sorry I was so long in responding, though!)

Reviewer: CoalBlackCat
Date: 12/30/09 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was hilarious! Having a pillow fight is soo James and Sirius hahaha

Author's Response: A pillow fight seemed to be inevitable. Poor Moody. :) I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for reviewing--it made my night!

Reviewer: Hiyas-said-hi
Date: 12/15/09 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wellllll, AHAHHAHAH! HAHA! HAHA! Funny!

Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I'm glad you liked my little story, and that it made you laugh. :)

Reviewer: Lunalovegoodrox
Date: 12/06/09 15:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it! It was very funny, and I love the way you portrayed Sirius. A pillow fight, though? Leave it to those two... :)

Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond... I'm glad you liked this! I had a lot of fun writing it. And what can I say? The pillow fight just sorta happened.... :) Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond... I'm glad you liked this! I had a lot of fun writing it. And what can I say? The pillow fight just sorta happened.... :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/07/09 10:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, this made me laugh. I love this pillow fight part. That was funny. The ending was great. I just love this whole story.

Author's Response: I love knowing which parts people like the best! And, oh, Sirius and James having a pillow fight while on an Order mission...? Tsk, tsk. I'm glad you found this funny and that you liked the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bella-weasley
Date: 08/28/09 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

ok I'm trying to righting this theu laughter that was so funny oh god thats nice really good story, and I'm laughing myself silly at it

Author's Response: I'm really glad you found it funny--and I'm glad you laughed yourself silly. :) That makes me feel like I've accomplished what I set out to do! Thanks for letting me know what you thought!

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 08/27/09 16:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story immensely, particularly the way Sirius told the story to Remus. It was just like a conversation in the way they both spoke and how random it got.

Author's Response: I teach kindergarten, so I have a lot of these kinds of 'backwards' conversations trying to figure out who has done what to whom. (Is it a bad thing that I'm comparing Sirius to a kindergartner?) Thanks for reading and letting me know you liked this!

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/26/09 20:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

So I saw this and I just LOVE humor fics, and I was like, oh, this looks good. And then I started reading it.

The beginning was good. The thing about Remus's arm being pulled out of its socket was funny. And then, once we got to this part, this story went from oh, that's cute! (NOT a bad thing) to HEY! THAT'S REALLLY FUNNY!

“Well, if Evan Rosier hadn’t kicked Moody’s magical eyeball under a forklift, then he’d have been able to see that it was James behind him and not a Death Eater, and he wouldn’t have hexed James.”

That line made me laugh. hard.

Dude! This story is HILARIOUS!

I'm gonna say

10/10.

You should write more humor fics. :-)

H_T

Author's Response: I'm really glad it made you laugh! I'll admit I chuckled a few times as I wrote the thing (especially imagining Sirius make the arc with his arm to show the way that Moody's eyeball flew through the air). But sometimes I don't know if something is honestly funny or if it's my own brand of weirdness shining through. So, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for the nice things you wrote--and for letting me know you liked this. (And if you've got an idea for a humor fic, I'm always open! :) )

Reviewer: Arial Felchem
Date: 08/26/09 8:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hilarious story! I was cracking up the whole time! Very true to character, I can totally see this happening during the first war.

Author's Response: I'm glad it made you laugh! Even better, I'm glad you thought I nailed the characterisations. Thanks for reading and letting me know what you thought!

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