can't wait to see what happens next
I adore how you add to the depth of the characters. Great, again! :) Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter(s)!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I always try to think INCEPTION when I write - I've got to go deeper. :D
I really love this chapter. It's really good. I love the characterization in it. I can't wait for the next chapter.