Reviews For Father
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/15/09 18:25
Chapter: Father

AW, Alyssa! Must you always write such sad poems? Itwas really good, though!

Author's Response: Thank you, Andi! Sad poems are my best, but I have a couple happy ones that I wrote that you might see.

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 09/15/09 15:54
Chapter: Father

that was good and i wish it was longer! its sad too... good job! =D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry about the leignth. I'm not to good with the long poems.

Reviewer: KarasAunty
Date: 09/15/09 14:51
Chapter: Father

Hello ron lover,

this wee poem was short, yet poignant. Those poor children, seeing their father die (I hope, at least, it was of old age).

 

Nice to someone else with poetry onsite!

 

Kara's Aunty :)



Author's Response: Thank you, Kara's Aunty! I imagined him dying of old age, so that's what I'm going with. Thank's for reading!

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