I'm a bit confused. Hermione's finding Muggle lab equipment does not make sense. She knows if she finds out more secret, she will lilkely be forced to reveal the secrets to Voldemort. So why would she dig around and put Draco furthee in trouble?
It smells like the plot is driving Hermione taking out of character actions.
But all in all, good!
Author's Response: Hermione battles with this very issue in the next chapter, though it's possible I didn't flesh it out enough. And it's not like she was intentionally looking to get him into trouble. It was her natural curiosity which carried her through the invisible door. I'm glad you like it, though! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
I have a question! I finished the story before asking this, just in case it would be answered, but to my knowledge it never was. Why was Draco brewing a love potion?? What was the use of that? I could understand all of the others, but not the love potion.
Author's Response: Draco brewed a love potion because it reminded him of Hermione. Whenever he was near it, he was remembered what he'd done to her and why he had to make it right. It was his inspiration to keep going when things became rough. :) Good question!
OMG, in tears, I've read both stories of yours and I think they are just divine! You truly have a gift, thank you for sharing it with us. One of my favorite Dramoine stories. Much Love, keep writing
Author's Response: I'm so happy you were able to connect with this story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Lovely story although dark. Brought up some interesting thoughts about mortality. And the language was beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I had to go to some very weird, very dark places to get into the right mood for a lot of this fic, and I'm glad to hear that my introspection paid off!
brillant..just brilliant :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
This might be the best story I've ever read, you write so well! I almost cried when he took her to the grave...really brilliant, I can't wait to read Masks!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and I hope you enjoy "Masks" as well!
This story was fantastic. I like how you handled all the hard topics, and how you kept the characters believable. I cannot wait to read more of your work
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm very excited for you to check out more of my stuff; hopefully I won't disappoint!
This story roxxxx big time!!!!!the ending is just gr8 although i was saddened at harry, ron and ginny dying.....but i think that's what it should be so that draco and mione can continue their romance!one of my fave fanfics EVER!!!keep up dramione and keep up the faith!
Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! And yes - Dramione for life!! :D
Wow. That's all I can say right now. This was definitely the best fanfic I have ever read. The characters and the storyline were beautiful and my heart continues to ache for all that they went through and rejoice with the healing they found. It is just magnificent.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so glad you enjoyed and were able to connect to my story. :)
Well I can say your writing is amazing,perfect!A different story,really dark...Hermione had been through so much,torture,pain and she make it..really admirable hehe
And yes Spiti means 'house' in Greek,I'm from Greece so you can trust me :p
Author's Response: Perfect! I'm glad to know I got Spiti correct. Sometimes Google translator can't be trusted! I'm glad you liked my writing and even happier that you enjoyed the story. Hermione went through a lot, but she got through it. She is the resilient, after all. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
by the way, i absolutly loved the power that the charm bracelet held, everything that he did out of love....
Author's Response: :sigh: Yeah, that was one of those details that I just had to include. He wanted to protect her so badly, and had been for so long, even though she was completely unaware of it. He made some bad decisions, but he was devoted to her, and that's what counts.
i read this and "aversion to change". This is the best fan fiction i have read yet: powerful, heart-wrenching and beautiful. I wouldn't be surprised if this was ever published.....truly amazing....
Author's Response: Thank you!! Gosh, I would love this to be published, but I think JKR would have a few problems with that... Lol. I'd hate to be sued by one of my idols!! But I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
hmmmm…will all go well? It really is killing me! This is such a great read. I hope to add it to my favourite story list once I finish.
Awwww…in a weird way…At least Draco was trying to protect her all those years through her bracelet. If only she had worn it in Azkaban instead of keeping it in the pouch.
What has Draco got in store for Miss Granger? It is getting quite late (or early coz it is past midnight) so I'm going to his the sack. Goodnight Misdemeanor1331!
Sorry I forgot to review the last chapter, I've been a bit tired lately. The story is great, I'm really enjoying it. You've now got me hooked. What's going to happen to Hermione? Will she have to live like that forever? Who is that mysterious young girl? I can't wait to find out.
I will review whenever I can as I continue…
Good start, although I must say that the description of Neville's appearance was truly gut wrenching.
I'm onto the next chapter and will review soon.