Reviews For Life in Death
Reviewer: SilverGryffindorDragon
Date: 10/21/11 2:15
Chapter: McDonald's Adventures

I loved your story!

Author's Response: thanks so much!!

Reviewer: Rhian
Date: 06/15/11 8:44
Chapter: McDonald's Adventures

wow...didn't expect that at all O.O

Author's Response: hope you liked it :)

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 02/27/10 3:34
Chapter: Prologue: Kinda Dead

I like it...the only problem is that I want more and that I want to know what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I promise I'm trying. I submitted it like, 8 times, but me and grammar, we don't along so great. I really need a beta reader... If you're one, or you know any..... it would help... a lot.... I'm really glad you like it though!

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 02/19/10 17:32
Chapter: Prologue: Kinda Dead

love it! plez update so that i may read it! cant wait to see what happens when they "die"

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Hopefully, if I can ever get it submitted (9th time's the charm?) you'll like it! Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: XxCourtneyxCeexX
Date: 02/16/10 5:01
Chapter: Prologue: Kinda Dead

Good =]
Now I just cant wait to see what happens next..
Hurry up =D

Author's Response: Well, good. I'm glad you liked it enough that it deserved 2 smileys. I'm working on it, I'm working on it.... English grammar is just so difficult... We should just fix it to make it apply to the same rules as spoken English.

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 12/16/09 4:47
Chapter: Prologue: Kinda Dead

It'll be very interesting to see what happens next...

Author's Response: It's been submitted. The chapter has been finished for a while, but I just can't seem to get it through. Hopefully it will with time! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Virgil
Date: 11/16/09 18:59
Chapter: Prologue: Kinda Dead

Good first chapter! I'm itching to find out what happens next...

...*itches*....

~Virgil~

Author's Response: thanks for the review! i pretty much have the next chapter done, it just needs some tweaking. i hope to put it in sometime next week when school isnt so busy.

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