It was great, a simply perfect Severus/Lily. I just loved the way you wrote this, and it was such a beautiful story. I don't know what else to say, it's just wonderful.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I really appreciate that. <3
I liked it. I thought they were both in character, and the scene was quite believable, and sad.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. <3
that was really good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. ^_^
I :152;snape and lily so much
My fav snap/lily thing is the guys like potter song from a very potter sequel especially when Lilly walks off stage with James and snape calls after her 'Lilly! Lilly wait! I love you!' and when snape looks in to the mirror of Erised and sees lily in it
Author's Response: Brilliant. :P
I really enjoyed this - I liked your characterisations of Severus and Lily. I really loved the unsaid tension in this fic, it was perfect for the setting.
"Her name was both foreign and natural on his tongue. How powerful a name was: to say it, to whisper it, to yell it, to cry it, to love it. He could heal her with it; he could break her with it." - This was a really interesting concept about a name and what a name means and it fitted in well.
"“He’s part of the reason,” she agreed. “But it’s much bigger than that, and had you ever realised that in school, we might have been more than just two strangers passing in the night.” She looked down at her feet." - this was great too - it was so much more effective than her going off on an 'I hate Death Eaters' rant.
I love this fic in general!!
Author's Response: You're really making my day! ^_^
This is my first ever Snape/Lily story and I was rather nervous. I'm glad the tension came through, and the characterisation. So I am very happy that you liked it. Thank you!
I think this is EXACTLY how he would have reacted! I can totally picture JKR writing a scene like this and I'm kinda depressed that she didn't... my heart aches for Snape because I can't imagine the regret he had to live with for the rest of his life. And it's not like she chose just anybody besides him, she chose JAMES.. which makes this even worse. This is a great and IC story! I could really feel his frustration and pain. :(
Author's Response: Aww. *blushes* Thank you very much. This is my first ever Snape/Lily story, and I just wanted it to see real yet give Snape a tiny bit more than what JKR gave him. He still didn't get the girl, but he got a kiss, and he got the affirmation that Lily truly saw him as her best friend.
Thank you thank you. You made my day. ^_~
its really good i feel the same way u do to i feel that i suck at writing thanks for posting im currently writing a story too :D
Author's Response: Goodluck with your story, and thank you for the review. ^_^
This is just such a beautiful (and well written) story. Of course it doesn't suck and neither does the title. In my humble opinion it would fit in perfectly with The Prince's Tale, and it pulls on the same heartstrings. Both characters were in-character, at least the way i picture them.
All in all i think this is a great fan-fic, one of my favourites! :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. *blushes* I'm always hesitant to write Snape fics since I adore him so. I'm very glad that you believe I did justice to him and to Lily. I would have preferred this in The Prince's Tale too, to give him just a little something. ^_~ Thanks so much for your review. ^^
I've read the book. i think u captured the charactors perfectly.
Author's Response: Well, thank you. ^_^
*sigh* No, it doesn't suck. Not at all. I don't think Snape's ooc either. Thank you for the story, it's great.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much. I am ever so pleased I was able to write Severus and Lily competently. Thank you for reading and reviewing my modest piece. ^_^
I disagree with your chapter end notes. Your story, in my opinion (which is a rather well-informed opinion, if I do say so myself), is excellent, however short it may be. Good ideas, good plot line, good grammar. I think that your story is better-written than many of the stories I've read in Mugglenet's fanfiction.
Author's Response: Wow. *blushes* What compliments!
I was so worried that I would not do Severus or Lily justice. It was a story that came to mind while I was sick, and I /had/ to write it. I just have so much love for Severus' character and the unrequited love he had for Lily. I wanted to write a longer, chaptered fic, but I was worried that my characterisation wasn't good enough. You have given me hope that I /can/ write it. Thank you so much.
I really like this! It's one of the best Sev/Lily-s I've ever read. So sad how they were never meant to be :'( but I've always been a fan of this pairing. Keep writing Sev/Lily - you really capture the essence of their relationship.
Author's Response: Wow, what a compliment. Thank you so very much. This is the first Snape/Lily fic I have ever written. I agree wholeheartedly with your love for the pairing and how tragic their unrequited love is. Snape is my favourite character from HP, and it is so sad that he never got to have a relationship with Lily.
I am deeply humbled that you believe that I have captured the essence of their relationship. I was so nervous that it would turn out to be crap. Heh. I will have to try my hand at this pairing again, perhaps something long and chaptered. Anything in particular like you'd love to read? ^_^
Thanks for the wonderful review.