This sounds really dark, and really interesting
Wow, excactly how I imagined it. Very realistic, and very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks! :]
Wow, that's really sad, that Tom wished something would shrival up, because he felt miserable. A very cruel child.
He's definitely a loner...No friends, he won't accept help, from that Mr. Paris...They're trying to help him, and he's resisting.
He is indeed a very angry child.
Thanks for a great story, Tom is really creepy in this chapter...
Wow, that's really sad, that Tom wished something would shrival up, because he felt miserable. A very cruel child.
He's definitely a loner...No friends, he won't accept help, from that Mr. Paris...They're trying to help him, and he's resisting.
He is indeed a very angry child.
Thanks for a great story, Tom is really creepy in this chapter...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading again! Yes, he is one creepy, angry, messed up child :( Ends up being a creepy, angry messed up man too lol. ~hotbutterbeer
i like it but i like to read all of it Good Job tho!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it ;) It's really busy around here because of the holidays, I don't have any free time! Second chapter (well first chapter really) up soon, I promise! :) ~hotbutterbeer
Hi, I just read your story, happy to be your first review. I do hope you get more, because I thought this story was brilliant! You described Merope's sad state perfectly, sad and pitiful. Poor girl!
I'm glad that she had her boy in a safe place, although it's a shame that she died. Perhaps do to the fact that she never got proper care. At least the baby seems healthy.
I hope you get more reviews, thanks for a great story, and I love your name! Hotbutterbeer sounds great on a cold winter's night! ;0)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Awesome review for my very first one! :D I'm really excited for the story, Voldemort is an interesting point of view to write from and I've never read a fanfic centered on his story, so I thought people might want to hear it. :] Kind of a downer though, it's a bit depressing to sit here thinking about his life! haha. :) Thank you again! ~hotbutterbeer