Reviewer: Carvalho
Date: 03/22/14 20:47
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

This was exactly what I needed to feel beter Thank you so much for this lovely story!

Reviewer: Lightening
Date: 02/09/12 21:03
Chapter: I. Pathetic Pilgrim

I love your work

Reviewer: StormSeraph
Date: 01/23/12 3:36
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

Beautiful imagery...

Reviewer: Ladynix
Date: 12/13/11 20:58
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

God, what a beautiful story. Thank you!

Reviewer: wingedana
Date: 02/23/11 17:01
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

OH MY YOU ARE GOOD!!!

Reviewer: JaydenScott
Date: 07/02/10 23:50
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

yet another inspired piece by my favorite author thank u for the snapeiness

Reviewer: Maggie1985
Date: 06/16/10 8:38
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

You are an exceptional author. I would like to see more HG/SS stories soon. Nicely written.

Reviewer: reedjohnson3
Date: 03/06/10 13:25
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

Cuuuuuuuuute

Reviewer: Pen Sieve
Date: 02/02/10 5:25
Chapter: I. Pathetic Pilgrim

That was so lovely, and very beautiful. You voice Snape's conflicts very well, he makes absolute sense. Well done :)

Reviewer: relichunter18
Date: 01/12/10 22:29
Chapter: I. Pathetic Pilgrim

Thank you for your continuing Snape/Hermione stories! They all have such unique plots and show different aspects of the characters that could be.

Reviewer: avdreader
Date: 12/24/09 13:24
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

Wow, love this!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/22/09 12:15
Chapter: V. One Lost, Found

I'm sure Severus was in a place he was very unfamiliar with. Everyone seemed to know what was going on except him. Even McGonagall knew what was up. I've enjoyed reading this Christmas story.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/21/09 20:52
Chapter: IV. Reckless Reality

That was sweet. I was afraid it wouldn't go well--Severus was so stilted. And, I was afraid of a sad ending. But this was good. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/21/09 20:45
Chapter: III. Frozen Fantasies

Poor Severus. People in the park must think he's nutty--sitting alone on a park bench, muttering to himself, with a doll laid across his lap. What's that old song--It Might Have Been--the saddest words. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/21/09 20:30
Chapter: II. Irresolute Past Present

How sad that Snape is just waiting for something to happen. It's too bad he can't be more proactive. I hope Hermione appears. Great chapter.

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 12/21/09 0:00
Chapter: IV. Reckless Reality

Merry Christmas to me - a new Hermione/Snape story from Subversa.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/20/09 23:46
Chapter: IV. Reckless Reality

Very cute and sweet! At last we know the doll's origins, and who it will belong to. Perserverence paid off for Severus, as he and Hermione walk to Grmmauld Place.
Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/20/09 23:40
Chapter: III. Frozen Fantasies

As if Snape ever read a sickly romance novel..lol I don't like them myself.
Severus is allowing his mind to wonder, over Hermione...Apparently, hes truly smittened with her, but does'nt have the guts to say so.
I wonder what he'll do with that doll?
Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/20/09 23:32
Chapter: II. Irresolute Past Present

Well, Severus seems to be pining for Hermione, for her companionship. Which is why he walks in this same park.
He enjoyed their talks and walks in the park, then she left to do her own thing, leaving him, lonely?
Thanks for a great story.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/20/09 23:17
Chapter: I. Pathetic Pilgrim

A strange thought accurs to me,every time I read a Snape related story...He is always portrayed as sullen and miserable. True, that is his demeanor, but you would think he would be happy to walk in this park, hoping to see the girlwith the bushy hair. Of course, he hates Muggles and the fact that he's in a MUggle park, watching them, makes him even more sullen. This is just my opinion, of course. I have read quite a few of your stories and loved each and every one of them, and this one is no exception. I just wish Severus would just chill a bit and enjoy life! just my thoughts. Thanks for a great story and hearing me out. I hope I did'nt offend.

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