Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 12/29/09 11:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is really interesting.
You have got Ron's character spot on.
It's good to get it from his point of view.
Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you kindly!

Reviewer: TonksfortheMemories
Date: 12/24/09 5:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really interesting to see this scene from a different perspective, we often forget how hard it must be for Ron, who has a very close-knit family to run off and not be able to let anyone in on the mission.

In character the whole way, I really enjoyed this fic, Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, it's true about Ron and I tried to emphasise how isolated he must feel BECAUSE he has so many people he wants to tell, ironically enough. Glad you enjoyed!

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