Reviews For She's Got the Time
Reviewer: Hermione24
Date: 10/03/12 0:10
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: We Are Broken

Hello... your story is great, I hope you will continue updating. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. I hope you'll finish this story soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: Hermione24
Date: 10/03/12 0:10
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: We Are Broken

Hello... your story is great, I hope you will continue updating. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. I hope you'll finish this story soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: mrscooke
Date: 01/27/11 0:36
Chapter: Chapter 4: Timshel

you ever gunna finish this i love it so far

Reviewer: lrsgreenleaf
Date: 05/30/10 22:35
Chapter: Chapter 4: Timshel

I love it and cannot wait to read more, but I guess I'll have to wait. I wonder what Sirius was thinking? lol
great writing.

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 05/20/10 8:40
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: We Are Broken

Ever read Smells Like Sirius Black by Soap? Similar plot.

Author's Response: I have and it's not similar really. For a start Hermione returns to the 'present' in that fic and in the sequel marries Remus Lupin... Romantic xx

Reviewer: RGSH
Date: 04/14/10 15:11
Chapter: Chapter 3: She's Electric

I dont think lillys been ruined i kind of liked it anyways good chapter looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you. It was nice to get your review after one that said I had comletely ruined Lily. I'm writing the next chapter atm. Romantic xx

Reviewer: Padfoot1205
Date: 04/14/10 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 3: She's Electric

You completly sabotashed Lily!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like the plot but the way you discribe Lily will make J.K Rowling turn in her grave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is disgrace I tell you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you feel that way. I did say in my authors notes at the end why I did what I did. I have to clarify that Lily is not a full on punk, she only sympathises. Also, you have to read the song lyrics at the beginning of each chapter, they kind of premeditate what is to come in the chapter. I'm glad you enjoy the story otherwise. Maybe you could keep reading? Romantic xx

Reviewer: mrscooke
Date: 04/12/10 6:54
Chapter: Chapter 3: She's Electric

Hope you keep going . Why did you make Lilys mum and dad northeners?

Author's Response: I made Lily's Mum a Northerner because I have family up in Leeds and Whitby, so it was a tribute to them in many ways. I made her Dad a Welshman because of the surname. It's quite Welsh, I do believe. I'm writing chapter 4, and enjoying it. I hope to finish this story, as I have so many ideas for it. Romantic xx

Reviewer: mrscooke
Date: 03/29/10 17:28
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: We Are Broken

I hope you dont forget about this one I like it alot

Author's Response: No, the next chapter is with my beta now. Romantic xx

Reviewer: mrscooke
Date: 03/19/10 11:16
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: We Are Broken

Hi i was amberleaf
hope u continue with this i love it so far
trying to do some fanfic myself but just cant seem to get it right so think i will stick to reading for now :)

Reviewer: cia
Date: 01/17/10 11:30
Chapter: Prologue Part 2: Do You Want the Truth or Something Beautiful?

hey..must say that u'r story was a lot of fun to read. i too am working on something involving a time turner.do continue writing.cheers.

Author's Response: Cool, but I'd like to point out that there is no Time Turner in this fic. I'm glad you enjoy the story though... Romantic xx

Reviewer: amberleaf
Date: 01/14/10 4:17
Chapter: Prologue Part 2: Do You Want the Truth or Something Beautiful?

this is getting good please update again soon

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can. MNFF keep rejecting my submission because of minor grammatical errors (the LOVE their commas, believe me!) Chapter 1 is written so I'll submit it now. Hopefully it'll only take one try! Romantic xx

Reviewer: darkchocolatemntn
Date: 01/04/10 14:10
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: We Are Broken

very dark prologue, but it was good and the storying seems promising... if you do what your summary says, it should be really good. i look forward to the next chapter. you write really well though.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The second part to the Prologue is on its way! Romantic xx

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 01/04/10 13:32
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: We Are Broken

wow i really liked it even though it was short. the summary looks really promising cant wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I've submitted the second part of the prologue already... Should be up soon. I will be taking a break from writing this month though, as I have exams! Romantic xx

Reviewer: amberleaf
Date: 01/04/10 3:33
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: We Are Broken

hope u continue soon this chapter was good but very short

Author's Response: My next chapter is waiting to be adminned.

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