Reviews For Neutrality
Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 01/24/10 18:49
Chapter: Chapter 3

What a lovely ending. I enjoyed reading this little story. Your imagination never ceases to amaze me. I liked the softer side of Mr. Lockhart you showed. Arthur was an unexpected, but nice surprise. You captured Bellatrix's madness perfectly. Thanks for a great little story. Nicely done. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Crystal. I love hearing what you have to say and I'm glad you liked the story. I figured it would be nice to add some familiar faces to the mix as Andromeda couldn't do this alone. Thanks again for always reading. :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 01/21/10 9:45
Chapter: Chapter 2

No! You had to go and leave me hanging like that. I want to read more. I knew Lockhart was full of hot air and that he was only leading her on a wild chase. I think he was just wanting another adventure he could write about. I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Nicely done. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, the idea for the use of Lockhart came rather suddenly and I figured he had to start out somewhere for all the stories he was going to write. haha. Thank you so much for the review and I promise I'll post the last chapter soon. :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 01/21/10 9:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm so glad I decided to read this. I enjoyed every minute of it. I am jealous the way you can describe a scene so beautifully. I laughed the minute I saw Gilderoy Lockhart's name. I hope Ted and Andromeda can overcome their problems and make it work. Off to read the next chapter. Nicely done. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Crystal. I very much enjoyed writing it and I'm glad you liked my descriptions as they are always the hardest part for me. I hope Ted and Andromeda can too. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

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