Reviewer: adeebee10
Date: 03/20/10 21:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

this was one of the sweetest things i've ever read!! i was a little worried at first that all of them were going to love her in a crush-type way, but i liked how you included fatherly and friendly love as well :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It would be so wrong, imo, not to include other, different kinds of love. :) I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: oliverwood1993
Date: 03/19/10 1:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

definitely worth it. Love the hugo weasley part! keep it up! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: blackbeauty7
Date: 03/15/10 14:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

this hermione piece ws brilliant! it ws d most maturely writtn piece of fiction i hav read in a long time...keep up d awesum wrk, ur 1 of my all time fave writers :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like -- and it always makes me smile to be called a favorite author :)

Reviewer: hgprincess92
Date: 03/14/10 21:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, you really know how to open up someone's heart don't you. I loved this. Stop toying with the idea and go for it those pieces whatever you come up with will be magnificent I'm sure.
One thing, when you say " moony Luna Lovegood" do you mean moony or loony? Just wondering... another beautiful piece!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm definitely planning on writing more one-shots like this. I did mean to call her "moony Luna Lovegood" although I suppose it could have also been simply "Loony Lovegood," as she's called in the books.

Reviewer: mennonitethespian
Date: 03/14/10 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is beautiful. A reminder of the various, but ever earnest, types of love. You captured them all marvelously.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you think so and liked it :)

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 03/14/10 13:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww this is soo cute! I would love to see this as a Molly and Authur Weasley one though just cause I figure you would make it soo good!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'll definitely do others, although at this point I have no idea who I'll do!

Reviewer: CharmFlicka
Date: 03/12/10 20:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

yup.definitely. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully I'll have another one posted soon :)

Reviewer: JWalnut
Date: 03/12/10 18:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was a very enjoyable read. Characterization has always been a sore point for me in fanfiction, and you really executed all the characters beautifully. I'd definitely love it if you wrote one for the other main characters too. =D

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I've always thought characterization was one of the most important parts of fanfiction, so I'm glad you think I've done it justice with this!

Reviewer: wilted_orchid
Date: 03/12/10 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is going to sound a bit weird if I don't explain first - today is the first day I've read fanfiction in nearly two years. And I'd very nearly given up again, it all seemed to have gone to the dogs; plot, characterisation, nothing seemed to be...original or more complex than tying a shoelace.

Then I found this. And you are absolutely right, I think this is a character study, and that's just what a good fanfiction needs to be. It needs to read like an appreciative extension, which this does.

You even kept to the little details of the series (your use of the number seven, for example) and those small points make all the difference. This is beautiful, quality writing.

Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's high praise :) I just don't think it would have been right without a number other than seven -- I'm glad you agree!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 03/11/10 22:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is adorable!!! Very different, I like it. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it all, including how different it was :)

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 03/11/10 19:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh absolutely - you must do the other characters too - especially Harry, Ginny and Ron. This was a beautiful piece of writing.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: preyes
Date: 03/11/10 19:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awesome!!! We want moreeee!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 03/11/10 10:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

this was ABSOLUTELY delightful!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: SaHaWe
Date: 03/11/10 10:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love it!!! Wonderful story, well written.
Would love to read stories like this about Harry and Ginny.
Is the "oaf" Scorpius?

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll definitely be writing more similar stories for other characters (including Harry and Ginny, as they're my favorites!) And, yes, I might have been imagining Scorpius when Ron called him an oaf ;)

Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 03/11/10 0:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved this. You had me tearing up on numerous occasions. I love that you included Viktor and Arthur and Neville. I adored reading those segments but it was just fantastic overall. Now, I'm not usually someone who usually reads canon so you must have done something right! The premise was great and I would probably read some more. I think doing the Trio might be a nice little series, almost like a tribute. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I had so much fun writing each part, so I'm glad you enjoyed all of them! I also have a soft spot for Neville, so it's good to know you liked his inclusion! :)

Reviewer: Phlightless_phoenix_28
Date: 03/10/10 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Please write more! What an interesting story, I would love to see a Lily Evans version! I like the Ron, Harry, and Ginny, too.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you found it interesting.

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 03/10/10 22:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Extremely well done! You've almost made me fall in love with her, too.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 03/10/10 20:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh my goodness..i loved this story! It was so sweet. It would be awesome if you did something similar with ginny, etc. great job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I definitely think I'm going to try and do something similar with a few other characters.

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 03/10/10 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow this one of the most unique things I've ever seen. I absolutely loved it and I admit I was tearing up at the end. I love delving into different characters and i definitely think you should do this for other characters (like Ron or Luna).

Author's Response: Thank you! That's high praise :) And ooh, I hadn't thought of Luna! She'd definitely be a fun one to do.

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 03/10/10 17:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good! I think Hugo's was my favorite. You did an excellent job with all the different characters and all of their personalities. I hope you do more of these! I would love to see some other characters! Anyway, I absolutely loved this!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hugo's was probably one of my favorites to write, so I'm glad you liked it! :)

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