Reviewer: mzap
Date: 03/30/11 16:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

Nicely done, Aida! I tend to really like Voldy satires and I think you did a great job with this one. Great premise here with the Dark Lord being successful in taking over the Ministry and such, and realizing all the things he actually has to deal with. I found it really funny the way the problems with Hogwarts came up and you worked it at such a nice pace. The insertion of the modernisms were great and the ridiculously long title, but I was actually left wanting a bit more for the chapter. I don't know what it was, but I think I was expecting more insanity to ensue? That was my only thing, but that's what later chapters are for, right? xD Ahhh, but I loved seeing the Slytherins going back into the Gryffindor tower and Voldy wanting to Crucio the magic out of everyone! Lovely work, Aida and I want to read more! :)

Reviewer: FawkesToTheRescue
Date: 10/20/10 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

Tehe, this was funny ...

What I really liked about this story was that it was funny but it did have a plot. And sometimes funny fics are just a lame series of jokes and this was not.

1.) You handled the humour well. One could go on and on about how "Oh Voldemort wouldn't say that" or "That wasn't quite logical" but of course, that's the whole point of this story. And sometimes, it's actually refreshing to read a story that is OOC just because you're not thinking in your head "Okay, this is wrong, this is wrong ..." It was actually quite joyful to read, and the humour was well crafted.

2) You actually have some good plot here. There is actually a plot, and I managed to find some poetic devices used here. Did you intentionally make the theme that "Once Voldemort takes over, the Slytherins will want to be in Gryffindor?" or "Voldemort's plans don't always work?" Or something along the lines of that such chaos would come that the Slytherins would want to be Gryffindors, so the world would be bent out of proportion?

I loved it. Fantastic!

-Megan

Reviewer: sixfeetunderthestars
Date: 03/21/10 14:07
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

This is beyond hilarious. Definitely one of the best humour fics I've read in a long time. Crucio-ing everybody might be an interesting ending...LOL. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. Please update often!

Reviewer: rubyberry
Date: 03/14/10 11:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

LOLLLLL THIS WAS SO FUNNY!!! LOVE IT!

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 03/11/10 21:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

This is hilarious. I could not stop laughing. I love Voldemort's new title and I love that the pure-bloods tried to sneak into Gryffindor tower. Looking forward to more, please update soon.

Reviewer: OkiBlossom
Date: 03/11/10 17:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

Aida,

This has got to be the funniest crcak!fic thing I have ever read. Not that I have ever read a crack!fic before, but whatever. I read this because I'm stuck on my own writing and you just made me laugh so much. The paperwork? Oh my God, really? The fact that the minion bows so low to the ground? Have you burnt down Gryffidor yet? Damn it. Sorry, I'm laughing piece after piece here. Weird fan fiction doesn't usually hold my attention. That line alone just made me laugh over and over again.

I saw your excerpt on EoM, so I was curious. I love the Super Duper High-Power Extreme whatever title. (Sorry, I know Voldemort's probably against us not knowing his name. He can't just Crucio them all? Hilarious, Aida.

He's a badass mofo. Give the man somebody to curse! Where's an idiot Death Eater when you need him?

Good job, really. All the way through. Hope that you have an update soon.

Kuri

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 03/11/10 17:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

This was really funny! I left you some questions on your Dueling Club forum btw! "I'm still a badass mofo." lol. I laughed pretty hard at that for a good 5 minutes. Keep writing, update soon!

Reviewer: Ying Hua
Date: 03/11/10 13:51
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

Very nice; I always wondered how Voldermort would be like in charge. As for setting the Gryffindor Tower on fire, that is so typically Slytherin. The Gryffindors would probably do the same with Slytherin dormitory though.

Reviewer: hestiajones
Date: 03/11/10 13:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

Hey there!

Haha! I laughed so hard while reading this. It's good to read something as crazy as this once in a while. :D I think my favourite part was where Voldy was reading a report on cauldron thickness. I felt so sorry for him.

There are a few glaring punctuation errors in your fic. Apart from them, this made an enjoyable read.

Waiting for updates,
Natalie.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/11/10 11:47
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which the Dark Lord Hates Bureaucracy and Finds that Sometimes the Old is Simply More Convenient than the New

Well, that was pretty funny. It illustrates why I would never want to be in a real high position of power. I wouldn't want to deal with all of the paperwork. I'm sure this is nothing like Voldemort expected. The thought of him wanting to Crucio everybody but realizing he just can't do that anymore was hilarious. I look forward to your updates.

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