Reviews For How To Be Dead
Reviewer: deathwithanaxe
Date: 07/07/12 3:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved old Harry. Old Harry rocks! And thinking that there are only a couple of sentences describing what he was like and they got the rusty wheels of my imagination're brilliant!

Reviewer: Ginnypotter2699
Date: 03/03/12 2:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautiful fic… so moving. :)

Reviewer: Shreeja
Date: 02/14/12 9:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was brilliant. The last bit was..I don't think I have the right words to express it. You captured their anxieties and helplessness mixed with love really well. I loved it.

Reviewer: Ginny Potter
Date: 02/14/12 7:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

I... oh Merlin! IT HURTS! -is sobbing so hard I can't breathe-

Reviewer: daniicaca
Date: 09/18/11 11:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really wish you would have left the Sirius, Remus, and Snape parts in. Sirius was probably my favorite character in the entire series and it would have been nice to see him interacting with James and Harry at the end. I was also hoping for a little conversation between Lily and Molly maybe just after Molly died. Molly is another of my favorites and a thank you from Lily would have been so sweet and heartwarming. I really did enjoy this story overall though. Twas a great one!

Reviewer: Dobbysocks796
Date: 09/14/11 5:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is beautiful. Thank you!

Reviewer: Dobbysocks796
Date: 09/14/11 5:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is beautiful. Thank you!

Reviewer: sophis-reinis
Date: 08/28/11 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story made me cry. It was so beautiful, and so well-written. Thank you.

Reviewer: Neasa
Date: 08/27/11 15:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Like many who read this, at least from what I can tell by the reviews, I balled my eyes out. Lily and James were incredibly well written and I loved the part where Lily is watching Harry and Molly together. For some reason I never expected you to go onto the deaths of Ginny, Ron, Hermione, and finally Harry as well so I was completely blindsided by it. It may sound silly, because they are only characters, but the thought of Harry being the last to pass saddens me in ways I can’t explain. Granted, he deserved a long life for all the crap he went through, but the thought of him without Ron and Hermione just seems so strange. Then there was the way that you made the entire thing feel so real and emotional. Anyway, I have to say that you are one of the best writers I found on this site and I loved this story.

Reviewer: OohButterfly
Date: 08/05/11 23:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

This makes me cry. I can't see my key board. Stop writing so well and emotional!!

Author's Response: haha, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: bunnyzilla
Date: 06/24/11 17:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this story is really beautiful! It has just the right balance of humor and sadness and love... Brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you like it :)

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/02/11 9:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh his made me cry !!!!!!
(which is a feat by the way)

You by far are my favorite author and I love your stories so much

Author's Response: That's high praise! Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: sevanderslice
Date: 03/18/11 8:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm crying again. You have a gift.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!

Reviewer: Fred_Rocks29
Date: 01/10/11 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwww, made me cry at the end!! :) brill story

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LuLu94
Date: 01/07/11 1:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved it :D
Even the fourth time around.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad it's still good--so good as to deserve multiple rereads! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: SaboteurVictory
Date: 12/20/10 1:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

I definitely cried reading this. I feel like you understand JK's character's so well that you can put their stories into your own words, and its so believable! There are fan fics that create scenarios and plots that totally clash with the already created Potter world, but yours just fit in perfectly, and I almost feel like JK herself could have written this. It's got a great hint of humor mixed in with the beautiful, poetic love. Thank you thank you thank you for writing this.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's such high praise--I'm glad you think I understand the characters well and the story fits into the Harry Potter universe :)

Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 12/17/10 17:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

It was very emotional..well done..:)))

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: lacerracer
Date: 11/10/10 12:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

The whole Lily/James dying has always been the saddest part out of anything in the series for me. This story just added to that. I last line about killed me. I've enjoyed all the fanfics of yours I have read, and now this one is just added to the list. Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I know, I can't even stand to read about Lily and James dying -- this is as close as I can come, and I was nearly tearing up myself well I wrote this! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: afterglow745
Date: 08/27/10 23:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful work.

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: horselovr171
Date: 07/28/10 22:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this story. I think it's adorable and really sweet and sad at the same time. I hope you write more like it. My only criticism is constructive and it's that you pay a little more attention to your grammar. I run into that problem when I'm writing, too.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. If there are some typos are mistakes you want to point out, that would be great! I use my roommate as an editor, not an actual beta, so. . . .

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Epithalamium by Squibstress Professors
Minerva McGonagall is a bright, talented witch with dreams of becoming the first...
The Apothecary and the Bane by Icarus Unbound 1st-2nd Years
The apothecary receives a visitor in the wizarding slums of London.
M.I.T.: Entente Cordiale by Northumbrian 6th-7th Years
A strange and seemingly inexplicable death in London's West End brings an unlikely...
Twilit Confessions by ahattab33 3rd-5th Years
After returning from Australia with the Grangers, Ron realises the moment to...
Soul Sister by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
Ted and Andromeda have just eloped. So, they dance. A songfic featuring...
Time and Tide by minnabird 6th-7th Years
Filius has seen her all his life: the Woman. She has been drifting through time...
Footprints in the Sand by Equinox Chick 6th-7th Years
It was a summer like any other for Danny. He worked at his parents' Bed and...
Consolation by Gmariam 3rd-5th Years
For years, Remus Lupin found comfort in the arms of Rosmerta Richardson...until...
Dangerous Liaisons by eternalangel 6th-7th Years
It was a dangerous game she was playing; Dorcas Meadowes knew it, but the exhilaration...