I loved old Harry. Old Harry rocks! And thinking that there are only a couple of sentences describing what he was like and they got the rusty wheels of my imagination going..you're brilliant!
Beautiful fic… so moving. :)
This was brilliant. The last bit was..I don't think I have the right words to express it. You captured their anxieties and helplessness mixed with love really well. I loved it.
I... oh Merlin! IT HURTS! -is sobbing so hard I can't breathe-
I really wish you would have left the Sirius, Remus, and Snape parts in. Sirius was probably my favorite character in the entire series and it would have been nice to see him interacting with James and Harry at the end. I was also hoping for a little conversation between Lily and Molly maybe just after Molly died. Molly is another of my favorites and a thank you from Lily would have been so sweet and heartwarming. I really did enjoy this story overall though. Twas a great one!
This is beautiful. Thank you!
This is beautiful. Thank you!
This story made me cry. It was so beautiful, and so well-written. Thank you.
Like many who read this, at least from what I can tell by the reviews, I balled my eyes out. Lily and James were incredibly well written and I loved the part where Lily is watching Harry and Molly together. For some reason I never expected you to go onto the deaths of Ginny, Ron, Hermione, and finally Harry as well so I was completely blindsided by it. It may sound silly, because they are only characters, but the thought of Harry being the last to pass saddens me in ways I can’t explain. Granted, he deserved a long life for all the crap he went through, but the thought of him without Ron and Hermione just seems so strange. Then there was the way that you made the entire thing feel so real and emotional. Anyway, I have to say that you are one of the best writers I found on this site and I loved this story.
This makes me cry. I can't see my key board. Stop writing so well and emotional!!
Author's Response: haha, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review :)
Wow, this story is really beautiful! It has just the right balance of humor and sadness and love... Brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you like it :)
oh his made me cry !!!!!!
(which is a feat by the way)
You by far are my favorite author and I love your stories so much
Author's Response: That's high praise! Thanks so much :)
I'm crying again. You have a gift.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
awwww, made me cry at the end!! :) brill story
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks for the review!
Loved it :D
Even the fourth time around.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad it's still good--so good as to deserve multiple rereads! Thanks for the review :)
I definitely cried reading this. I feel like you understand JK's character's so well that you can put their stories into your own words, and its so believable! There are fan fics that create scenarios and plots that totally clash with the already created Potter world, but yours just fit in perfectly, and I almost feel like JK herself could have written this. It's got a great hint of humor mixed in with the beautiful, poetic love. Thank you thank you thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's such high praise--I'm glad you think I understand the characters well and the story fits into the Harry Potter universe :)
It was very emotional..well done..:)))
Author's Response: Thank you :)
The whole Lily/James dying has always been the saddest part out of anything in the series for me. This story just added to that. I last line about killed me. I've enjoyed all the fanfics of yours I have read, and now this one is just added to the list. Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I know, I can't even stand to read about Lily and James dying -- this is as close as I can come, and I was nearly tearing up myself well I wrote this! I'm glad you liked it :)
Brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful work.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
I absolutely love this story. I think it's adorable and really sweet and sad at the same time. I hope you write more like it. My only criticism is constructive and it's that you pay a little more attention to your grammar. I run into that problem when I'm writing, too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. If there are some typos are mistakes you want to point out, that would be great! I use my roommate as an editor, not an actual beta, so. . . .