Reviews For The End of Fear
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/09/10 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like it! Good Job! So many different ways to take them in!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: witch1561
Date: 05/09/10 13:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked all of the different scenes: although they are almost all horribly sad. I'm glad at least the last one ends on a hopeful note: maybe he will get better again. In many ways the saddest one is the fourth because at least in all of the others Ginny is just watching as bad things happen to Harry, but in the fourth she causes them: if only she'd not written the letter he'd still be alive.

I think all of the different scenarios have been well thought out - all the different possibilities for what their lives could have been like. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you! This turned out a lot darker than I had intended, but I like how it turned out, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! The fourth one is the worst in my mind, especially since there are so many happier ways it could have gone if only she hadn't written the letter.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 05/09/10 12:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

i read this on ur livejournal but i'm glad u posted it here too so i could review it.

i love the idea for this very original. 

my favourite scenerios are 3, 4, and 5. 

3 because it is so dark and angsty. 

4 because it was in my opinion the most different yet i could still see it happening of sirius did take harry. 

and 5 because the end was so cute even if it was a little sad. 



Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it original and liked it! I've been playing with that idea for 3 in my head for so long, it's so good to know it was enjoyed once I finally put it on paper. It is very dark, though, you're right. I think it would be lots of fun to do a multi-chaptered story with the universe of 4, although I don't have the time for it. And 5 -- well, it was a bit sad, but I like to think there's some hope in it. Thanks very much for the review!

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 05/09/10 12:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

These little one-shots you keep doing are so darn touching!!

I'm kind of bummed that Harry either ended up dead, crazy, or dissapeared in all but one of them (I like happy endings!!) - but I still loved this piece regardless. Great job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so busy with real life right now that it's a lot easier just to write one-shots that don't have any time constraints (no one is waiting for an update on a one-shot!) This was a little depressing -- it turned out much darker than I had originally intended. I'm glad you liked it nonetheless, though!

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