Reviews For Behind the Curtain
Reviewer: Gone_2_Honeydukes
Date: 03/20/12 0:50
Chapter: Chapter Four

The story was too blunt, sorry, didn't like it. There's potential in it though!

Reviewer: AnnaVD
Date: 05/01/11 13:18
Chapter: Chapter Four

wow this almost made me cry, especially the last part. it's amazing

Author's Response: aww thank you!! ~Virgil

Reviewer: haaaaayyleeeeeyy
Date: 04/09/11 18:55
Chapter: Chapter Four

:) great story :) loved it

Author's Response: Thank you! :) ~Virgil

Reviewer: Munchkin
Date: 09/06/10 23:28
Chapter: Chapter Four

ending was alittle too abrupt for me but overall i liked it

Author's Response: Thank you! Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 07/30/10 20:42
Chapter: Chapter Four

Mm... kind of short, bit of an anticlimax, really. No offense, it's just that... I don't know, it doesn't quite feel right. It's a good ending, all in all, but not quite what I'd hoped for.

Author's Response: I had hoped for something different as well, to be honest - I wanted Sirius to get back to the "real world," but I couldn't figure out a way to make it happen, lol. Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 07/18/10 0:04
Chapter: Chapter Four

Whoa, that was a new twist! Lily and Sev? Cool. :)

I love your concept and the story. In fact, I'm writing one about the veil too :P. It's not up yet, though. I was hooked the whole time, and all your twists are amazing. Actually, they also make perfect sense, that since there's no Hogwarts, Lily and James never met, but Lily got to be with Sev instead.

Well, I was actually hoping that Sirius finds some way to return to the real universe, but... aww well. But this was great too. I liked how he had faith in Harry at the end!

Awesome story!

--Nadia

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Writing about the veil is loads of fun, since canon basically gives you free rein. I'm glad you liked it, and I can't wait to see what your veil fic has to offer! Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 07/09/10 14:42
Chapter: Chapter Two

:O...James Potter a muggle? I can't believe it.
Want to keep reading though, looking forward to where this story is headed :)

Author's Response: Double-post, lol :)

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 07/09/10 14:40
Chapter: Chapter Three

Haa the serious Sirius joke amused me rather a lot.

And yey "Remy" seems like the normal Remus we all know and love :)

Hope you update soon.

Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 07/09/10 14:33
Chapter: Chapter Two

:O...James Potter a muggle? I can't believe it.
Want to keep reading though, looking forward to where this story is headed :)

Author's Response: I couldn't help but mess with Sirius some more, haha. You may be even more shocked by what happens next ;-) Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 07/09/10 14:25
Chapter: Chapter One

Wow...this is soooo intriguing!
Can't wait to read the rest :).

I also found your statement at the beginning, "This is for everybody who never fully accepted that Sirius Black could be killed by drapery."
rather amusing :)

Author's Response: haha :) thank you! I'm glad you found it amusing. Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: SilverLily_13
Date: 06/13/10 13:42
Chapter: Chapter Three

'Avatar' soundtrack, nice. :)

I really like the story! I'm actually writing one about the veil, too--didn't know it was so popular!--and anyway, it's not in yet. But I don't think it can top this one, very suspenseful and well done. Can't wait to read the end!

Author's Response: The veil is an interesting concept, isn't? I'm looking forward to reading your take on it. Thank you for reviewing! Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: littlewolf
Date: 06/10/10 20:59
Chapter: Chapter One

it sounds like an awesome story! can you do more than four please? i really want to know what happened to lily, by the way, please? =)

Author's Response: There will, unfortunately, be only one more chapter (actually, now I'm pondering extending the epilogue and adding it separately) but I can guarantee 100% that you will find out what happened to Lily. :) Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 06/09/10 22:04
Chapter: Chapter Three

Well, maybe it won't be so bad now that he's found Remy... anyway, I hope Sirius will live happily ever after... or at least, not too badly.

Author's Response: "Not too badly" hehe. Well, I suppose you'll have to read the next chapter and find out! Thank you for reviewing :) Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: Lunalovespudding
Date: 06/08/10 15:03
Chapter: Chapter Three

Cool story! Wait- *check end notes* did you say there's only one more chapter?

Author's Response: Yes, indeed. Originally there was going to be one more chapter and then an epilogue, but the epilogue was way too short so I'm just going to tag it onto the end. :) Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/08/10 15:00
Chapter: Chapter Three

Curiouser and curiouser! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Haha - like Alice in Wonderland. :) Thank you for the review! Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: paintswithflute
Date: 06/04/10 22:42
Chapter: Chapter Two

A very, very interesting concept, that I hope you explore more. Right now it seems like you could go in more depth, but you haven't written much so I'm not able to judge. But a very awesome and interesting concept that you've written very well.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! (Do you play the flute? That makes you awesome =] ) Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 05/30/10 12:43
Chapter: Chapter Two

Wow... you're really making Sirius's afterlife a Hell, aren't you?

Author's Response: If that's what you would call the world we live in... yes :) Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: Inn
Date: 05/29/10 14:54
Chapter: Chapter Two

Gr8

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Inn
Date: 05/29/10 14:54
Chapter: Chapter Two

Gr8

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Inn
Date: 05/29/10 14:46
Chapter: Chapter One

Gud notion i will stick to see where it progresses do continue

Author's Response: It will be continued! There will most likely be four chapters in all. Peace, Virgil

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