I am loving this story... You managed to make the characters continue to act in a cannon sort of way while still doing something unexpected. I also love a good Snape/Hermione story. Can't wait for the rest, please hurry!
Well, it happened again. It seems all of the best stories are left unfinished. Anyway, this story is definitely one of my favorites, and I typically have an aversion to Hermione/Snape or any Student/Teacher story for that matter. This is so well written. Please post the rest! Pretty please? :)
I actually made this account in order to write this review:L this story actually took me two to three hours to read, i know i know I'm a slow reader :P, and i started it about 4 in the morning and finished at around 7ish if i remember correctly, but because the story was so good i didnt feel tired in the slightest and it actually only felt like 10 minutes had passed when i had finished, you know what they say, time goes by fast if your having fun;) i think one of the main reasons i enjoyed it so much was that the story was so well written, it kinda felt like the words were coming from JKR herself:P and the plot was great as well and i loved how you didnt change the characters personality in your story from the one JKR had given them. Its a shame you didnt finish, and if i remember rightly you havent wrote another chapter for way over a year so it half feels like I'll never get to hear the end of this magnificent story:( although i still have my fingers crossed that you may write at least one other chapter going from your reply to the comment a little below myn, and if i can read American dates correctly that was only two months ago... It may sound sad but when i got to the end of chapter 8 i felt devastated to fine there wasnt at least a chapter 9:( i hope you see this and the other reviews below myn and perhaps get round to uploading the next chapter on to the site... Things were just starting to get interesting too;) if you see this could you please reply back to me?:$ x
I love it! Please write more soon!
It's all been said.
I started reading this story thinking it was finished, and then I was left wanting more..Yet it seems like no more will come for a long time, or it might never come.
Anyway, here's for hoping from another enthusiastic reader. I really enjoyed your story. I've been checking once week, hoping you'll post more.
I'll continue to do so.
(Don't "leave me hanging!")
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your super kind review. I am so sorry that you have been left hanging. I really appreciate that you like the story that much. Your review honestly made my whole week. The good news is the story is actually finished on my computer, but the last few chapters are unedited and I am not completely happy with the ending. I never wanted to hand a long gap between updates but real life got in the way and I haven't looked at the final chapters in a long time. I honestly don't know what I will get them posted but if you PM me on the beta boards, my name is Justice there, we can work out getting you the final chapters. Again, a million thanks for your review.
Ok. So I came in to reading this story knowing that the end of it would be the 8th chapter, even though it is posted as unfinished. I mentally prepared myself knowing that it would probably be a cliff hanger, but I could deal with it. I also noticed that this story has not been updated in over a year, thus I knew that only 8 chapters would be what I would forever read. But, the story so captivated me that I need to know what happens next. The plot is developing so well and interestingly that it can not just be finished just like this. Please update. I am being forced to beg for an ending, or more chapters. I hope you receive this message and update, but if you do not update, I just want you to know that you have earned yourself a fan of the story.
I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Love it to far.
love the story keep updating plz
I love the plotline.
Also like how you're not rushing their relationship, making it seem unreal.
Hermione and Snape seem in character, so a cookie for you :P
Keep up the good work and I hope to read more :)
I agree with those before me. Please upload another chapter if not the rest of the story.
FINISH THE STORY!!! PLEASE!!!!
I LOVE the storyline! The way you described her touching Snape was done amazingly well. Hermione's thoughts read true. And Snape seems really nice in your fan fiction though his progression of tolerating Hermione seems completely plausible because Snape needs to trust people's intentions before he can trust them as a person.
I"m loving this fic so so much :) Please continue writing! I love watching Snape's character develop :)
YAY!! They are coming together!! :D Haha. I love how you are bringing them together. This chapter was so cute.
This chapter is so beautiful. The description, the two different yet very similar POVs....beautiful :)
I love how you tell the stories from both POV, I think it is very effective. I am really enjoying this fic, I think you do a great job :) Just one little thing, Ollivanders is in Diagon Alley ;)
I love Snape/Hermione fics! You had no idea how excited I was when I saw that this one was up, and written by Justice :) Your characterization of Snape is amazing! It's actually totally believable! I hate when people change Snape to fit these types of fics. Also, I love how you portrayed Hermione, as caring and worried and everything. I am so excited to keep reading this :D
love the story so far, keep it up
This is one of the best written stories I have ever read about Hermione and Snape. I had me hooked from the very first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!! Keep up the brillant work