Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 11/02/13 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 16-Bella Notte

I discovered this fic very recently and love every bit of it. I really enjoy the alternate narration and the wonderful descriptions. The only characterisations I haven't completely agreed with is Lily's family situation, but apart from that I completely agree with everything else. Oh and please, please, please update soon!

Much love,
Your enthusiastic reader, Georgie :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Real life has kept me busy but I'm planning to update soon!!

Reviewer: fairy_lights27
Date: 08/07/13 18:54
Chapter: Chapter 15-Distraction and Temptation

Finally an update! :D
Great fic! Loved the Sherlock Holmes reference.. "seven flight problem" haha

Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't consciously think of that when I was writing but I do love Sherlock and his three-patch problems. John's series 3 mustache is killing me though lol

Reviewer: Rinnie-Rose
Date: 07/19/13 3:46
Chapter: Chapter 15-Distraction and Temptation

I'm so glad you're still writing this story! Poor James seems to be having quite a rough time.
Keep up the great work! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! :) Yes, he is, but it will get more cheerful fairly shortly.

Reviewer: Adorably stUPiD
Date: 01/25/13 5:41
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Returns and Regrets

nexr chapter coming soon??????????

Author's Response: Hi! Okay I have most of a chapter, but I'm so busy with school I haven't had time to finish it. Thanks for reading and I haven't forgotten/given up!

Reviewer: arya828
Date: 12/01/12 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 1- That Easy

Pretty good till now..... :).. i Loved it !!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Eventually I will update. I haven't stopped writing it, it's just on hiatus because I'm so busy...sorry!

Reviewer: arya828
Date: 12/01/12 11:49
Chapter: Chapter 1- That Easy

Pretty good till now..... :).. i Loved it !!!!

Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 08/25/12 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Returns and Regrets

Hey!!! When r u going to post the next chapter? Its been such a long time ive started to forget the rest of the story, which btw is great. please hurry up.

Author's Response: Chapter 15 still needs Something Else, if that makes any sense. I've got about 1500 words written, but it still needs work and with school I have very little time to work on it. I'll try & thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/01/12 1:35
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Returns and Regrets

please hurry up

Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry! The last couple of months have been absolutely crazy, but I'll get writing soon. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: pineappleshaker
Date: 04/11/12 0:26
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Returns and Regrets

Your fic is wonderful. The scene when James stayed up the night his mother died made me cry. I really love your writing. I look forward to reading how James makes it up to Lily and Sirius.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review! That's amazing that it moved you so much. I'll try to get the next chapter written as soon as I can. :)

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 04/06/12 17:01
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Returns and Regrets

omg next chapter soooooon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And I'll try :)

Reviewer: G_Baker
Date: 03/14/12 6:40
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Returns and Regrets

Hey! You FINALLY posted ! - I know it's been like 10 days since the last chapter, but I couldn't review. Anyways, I totallly LOVED it ! I just hope you dont take as long in the next one O.O xD

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I haven't started Chapter 15 yet, but I won't take as long to post as I did Chapter 14, I promise.

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 03/04/12 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Returns and Regrets

Wow! There's nothing that you could possibly improve about this story, except you could post the next chapter! :D Any hint what will happen next?

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review & for reading! :) I'll try to post the next chapter more quickly than this one...which isn't saying much since it took me five months to post Chapter 14, lol. I can say that the plot will thicken, and that even though Lily got all her feelings out (very loudly, I might add) the drama isn't quite over between her and James.

Reviewer: abhipotter
Date: 02/25/12 9:23
Chapter: Chapter 13-Engulfed in Flames

A little too glum I think...,, But d writing bit , well dats fabulous !!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! And yes, some bits of this story are very depressing. But it'll be happier eventually. :)

Reviewer: abhipotter
Date: 02/25/12 8:59
Chapter: Chapter 10-Missing

Zero to fornication in a three point five!!! ;). Rihanna , much???!!!! Lol
Upto now it was pretty awesome!!! Good job ..... I thought of reviewing after all chapters were finished but d above line kind of struck me ....... Like rihanna says I'll shut up and read !!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Haha I didn't even think of that but actually I was obsessed with Shut Up and Drive once upon a time...maybe it was subconscious.... Glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: theatregirl6
Date: 12/27/11 6:48
Chapter: Chapter 13-Engulfed in Flames

I really enjoyed this story and I cannot wait for more! I enjoy the suspensful romance and also the Hamlet line right in the middle (note the penname) The only thing that really irks me is the use of godric instead of God but that's just me :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review! :) The Godric instead of God thing for the characters from wizarding famiilies is something that I did think about for a while before I decided to do it. It still sounds a bit weird to me sometimes. But, since a lot of the interjections in Jo's novels include Merlin or one of the founders, I didn't think that it would be realistic for Sirius to go around saying, "Oh my god!" all the time. xD

Reviewer: MaybeOneRaindrop
Date: 12/20/11 4:44
Chapter: Chapter 13-Engulfed in Flames

I really like your writing style, especially this end bit 'there was no grief, no guilt, nothing except a stag bounding away into the forest.' Very nice.

By the way, I love your username! Mine is AVPM related too! ;)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! :) And I lovelovelove AVPM, especially Goyle. "No. Only quiet." *looks off into the distance* xD

Reviewer: Liet Dumbledore
Date: 12/17/11 5:57
Chapter: Chapter 13-Engulfed in Flames

This is a heartbreaking story. It has definitely captured my attention and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please hurry and submit it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review, and such a lovely one at that! Chapter 14 is actually done, but real life has interfered with my submitting it. I'll try to do so quite soon!

Reviewer: liljoo1013
Date: 11/25/11 23:54
Chapter: Chapter 1- That Easy

I really have enjoyed this story so far!!! and i really want to know what happens next! update soon please.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :) Chapter 14 is all done; I just need to find time to give it a last look and post it, which is proving surprisingly difficult (time-finding, that is, lol).

Reviewer: Shreeja
Date: 10/25/11 12:02
Chapter: Chapter 5-What Friends Are For

"“Some things are.” It wasn’t Remus’ fault that he was a werewolf. If the situation were reversed, James knew that all the other Marauders would risk their lives for him."

This line was, perhaps to me, one of the best in this chapter. It is a line hard to forget, because of (obviously) what Pettigrew did in later years. But it shows what the Marauders and their friendship stood for when at Hogwarts, and reasons for Pettigrew choosing the dark side would probably be another fan-fic :P

Loved your writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful, in-depth review! :) That was one of my favorite lines when I was writing it, and I'm glad you picked up on the reference to Peter's betrayal because that was my intention. As to the evolution of Peter Pettigrew, look for my upcoming fan-fic entitled "When Good Rats Go Bad!" No, I'm totally kidding (not least because that's a terrible title), but Peter has always interested me as a character.

Reviewer: Shreeja
Date: 10/25/11 11:59
Chapter: Chapter 13-Engulfed in Flames

Hi. I read all of your chapters, and I think the plot is wonderful. It doesn't stagnate, and encompasses not just the James-Lily relationship, but other relationships with James, like James-Sirius (with special reference to this chapter). I love how you use the language. Also, I am eagerly waiting for the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! This review just made my day! Yeah, I think that James' and Lily's relationships with their friends and family are important to their characterization, even though James/Lily is my OTP. Plus, Sirius has always been one of my favorite characters and I want to do him justice. :) I'll try to update soon!

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