Reviewer: chattyswimmer
Date: 02/14/11 15:16
Chapter: Chapter 2:Fire to the Pages

wow! it took me a little while to get into the story, but once I did, it blew me away. even though its a bit AU, and I'm usually not a fan of that, I really like this story! Keep writing!

Reviewer: lilyfan
Date: 08/19/10 22:20
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Book Filled With Rubbish

it's really scary sometimes of the resembleance between me and a fictional character. LILY EVANS IS SOOOOOOOO MY TWIN. i love your fanfiction. update soon! :]

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 08/11/10 15:47
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Book Filled With Rubbish

I rather liked this chapter :).

When we were first introduced to Laura, she reminded me slightly of Luna. I wonder why James decided to put Lily's trunk in that particular compartment?
I also laughed at James' reaction to Lily saying she'd rather have Sirius, as if it was Sirius' fault :).
Now update so I can read on, you have me intrigued :P

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Evora
Date: 08/10/10 21:32
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Book Filled With Rubbish

Hello, Gen!

I must say, I was laughing like a maniac while I read this. Very entertaining! :) To be honest, I was surprise to see the name "Paul" being used. I don't know, but it seemed very American rather than British. Just saying! The line "I'd rather go with Black than you" and James's reaction to it made me laugh out really loud. Laura is a very interesting character, and I'd like to know more about her, but why weren't Lily's friends introduced in the chapter? Hiding something, hmm? Anyway, I completely love this, and I hope to see fast updates from this soon!

Wait.. this is a sequel?! I must read that.. Oh wait, I already read that XD

Goodluck, Gen! That was an enjoyable chapter!

Author's Response: Dinny! Thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Chapter two is with the betas now, so it should be up in a week or so. :D

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