Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 03/13/14 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Encounters on the Platform

Very well written. I like how well you mix OCs with Rowling's characters. A lot of stories I've read really struggle with that.
Also, making the Malfoys poor is an interesting twist. I like it.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/14/13 17:20
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Epilogue Kitty-Kat and Panda Boy

That was a great ending. I really enjoyed this story. As much as I enjoyed reading this, I'll offer a small bit of advice: A final reading before publishing would be good. In many places there were missing words or words that were used incorrectly. The story seemed to go really fast. There were spots where I wish you would've spent more time explaining things. I read over those spots thinking I understood but it might have been more interesting if you had explained. Just a couple of thoughts.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/14/13 16:50
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Sacrifice of the Chlldren

That was a great twist at the end when Harry let Draco and his family live at 12 Grimauld Place.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/13/13 14:23
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Terror in the Tube

Is the London Underground ever called a Subway? Your writing style in this chapter made everything more exciting. I found myself reading really fast just to keep up with the storyline.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/09/13 17:24
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Hearings

I don't think the Dokes family had a chance in court. I'm very curious as to what Draco has up his sleeve.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/09/13 14:10
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Overnight and the Trap

My favorite part of this chapter was the "show". I think I would've liked to have seen more clumsy attempts at romance between Scorpius and Rose.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/07/13 17:15
Chapter: Chapter 10 - An Un-Malfoy Christmas

I'm interested to hear what Draco's answer will be. It was adorable when Draco carried Astoria over the threshold. I think she's done a lot for him.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/07/13 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 9 - The Taint

I'm enjoying reading this story and I know it's finished but sometimes I wish I had more detail. Or maybe I'm a lazy reader today:D Some days I don't fell like figuring everything out.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/07/13 15:45
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Idiots and Fires

You had me worried for a minute when Neville summoned Draco and Astoria to the Cauldron. I thought they might have done something, although innocent, to lose their lease. This is getting interesting.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/06/13 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 7 -The Griffin and the Orchid

That was a neat little flashback to explain why Draco wouldn't eat at his father's table. The entire Manor must reek of bad memories.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/06/13 17:37
Chapter: Chapter 6 - After the Match

It was funny when Vance's spell backfired. Certainly Neville could understand something like that. What would Hogwarts be without bad blood between some of the students.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/06/13 13:45
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Shades of Pride

That was a nice close score for the match. Hopefully the captain will realize that there are other talented players. Of course there's always next year.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/03/13 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Messages from Hogwarts

I'm ready to see how the Quidditch match goes. Am I understanding correctly--that Neville is being advised by McGonagall's portrait? Interesting.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/03/13 17:34
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Visitations

Neville's idea sounds like a good way to show that there are other talented riders in Gryffindor. Vardoo does sound inefficient although it might be good as a background practice.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/03/13 13:59
Chapter: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected

That certainly does seem unusual for a Quidditch captain to not hold tryouts. I suppose he could if he had experienced players and knew everyone. That wouldn't leave any space for new players who had transferred in. I'm enjoying this story so far.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/03/13 12:39
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Encounters on the Platform

I had wanted to read your set of stories for a while. When I saw you had a new chapter up I was reminded of that and decided to start reading. I think this is the first story I've read in which the Malfoys are not rich. I love second generation stories.

Reviewer: adarvefrara
Date: 11/18/12 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Visitations

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Date: 11/09/12 18:04
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Visitations

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Reviewer: adarvefrara
Date: 11/02/12 13:03
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Visitations

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Reviewer: Huffluffapuff
Date: 07/14/12 1:52
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Visitations

I love this story. But Ron didn't get detention for that he was in the hospital wing after Nobert(a) bit him. Neville went. I'm really enjoying the story!!!

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