Reviews For Stars Apart
Reviewer: hallowseeker
Date: 12/07/13 23:30
Chapter: Way Back Home

Brilliant fanfic! One of my favourites :)
In my opinion, you've depicted the characters very well, and you ended it perfectly on a happy note without any sort of reminders of what follows years later (tends to make me pretty down).
Looking forward to any future works!

Reviewer: Mary Evans
Date: 05/19/13 10:15
Chapter: Three Months Later

Perfect. Best Jily fanfic I've ever seen.

Author's Response: awf thanks! I've read enough good ones to be super flattered :)

Reviewer: tonks58
Date: 03/18/13 19:40
Chapter: Entropy

Been there, done that... I really love your Lily/James stories by the way :)

Reviewer: Laura22
Date: 12/08/12 7:49
Chapter: Three Months Later

Choosing one of many things to compliment: your Peter is perfect. I like that he isn't a bad guy or unlikable. He's exactly how I think he should be. He's obviously very different from his group of friends, and a little bit of an outcast, but he's present and well-liked. I loved it!

Author's Response: thanks so much for your reviews =D i appreciate that so much, because peter's so hard to write! we all know what happens so we all have to hate him, at least a little, but they trusted him at one point, you know? so thanks! hope you like the next one too, if you decide to read it :)

Reviewer: Laura22
Date: 12/08/12 7:49
Chapter: Three Months Later

Choosing one of many things to compliment: your Peter is perfect. I like that he isn't a bad guy or unlikable. He's exactly how I think he should be. He's obviously very different from his group of friends, and a little bit of an outcast, but he's present and well-liked. I loved it!

Reviewer: dspotter
Date: 10/18/12 6:14
Chapter: Three Months Later

So um... This is me... Crying... Because well, the Marauders are perf and probably my favourite HP characters and really, it just sunk in that are all dead now. Hence the crying. It's so bittersweet!! Anyways, loved this. It was great.

Author's Response: awww thanks for the reviews!! i know it's the sucky part about being so into the marauders ends so tragically! i'm writing a third one now and it just keeps getting sadderrrr. but i love them too much to stop :)

Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 09/01/12 18:36
Chapter: Fix You

Lovely ending to the chapter. Poor Lupin. Made me realize how alone he must have been after it all went down. all his friends dead or in azkaban.

Author's Response: Right?? The marauders all have pretty tragic stories, but his is usually the one that hits me the most, just because, you know, he's the only one left for so long.

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 08/10/12 0:46
Chapter: Way Back Home

Ouch- and here I was thinking Petunia could be actually nice. :P Good job!

Reviewer: PongOTongTongERong
Date: 07/01/12 0:34
Chapter: Three Months Later

What to say in this review? Words, I guess... That is possibly where I should start(:

Mugglenet Fanfiction... One thing that during my daily trips onto sort of offended me, "how could anyone be stupid enough to think that they can write a story to fit into the amazing world that JK Rowling created?" Until a fateful day when I entered the world of fanfiction to test cold waters... And discovered this wonderful story. To say the least, I ate my own words and became obsessed . Seeing that this story had a prequel, Trickster- I couldn't put it down and then moved onto Stars Apart. My journey with this story began, and with it a dread of a word- INCOMPLETE. At a point, I checked daily for an update, and when it came I was happier than ever. But then the periods between updates became longer and longer ( understandable, you have a life to live and writing fanfiction for your readers pleasure, I'm sure is not at the top of your list ) but waiting was unbearable. I went on and read a million other fanfictions from every site I could find, but at the end of the day Stars Apart was always there for me to go check up on, because it was my first ever fanfiction. And alas, there is my tale of reading your story.

When I saw the words COMPLETE underneath it when I checked for an update today, it almost left a bitter taste in my mouth. I was so sad that something I absolutely love- is over. In four words to describe Stars Apart would be- I FREAKING LOVE IT. Your characters are amazing and you have built them up in a way that I cherish everyone of them. Your writing is beautiful as well.

I'm so glad that I was curious enough to open the button that said fanfiction on it almost two years ago, because it led me to this story- which is so amazing that it opened my eyes to the full world of harry potter fanfiction.

Thanks girl(:
Love you muchos.

Author's Response: awww oh my god thank you so much!! i'm so glad i could be your gateway drug ;) i actually am working on a third part to this story though!! i just want to get a decent way into it this time around while i can so that when life gets hectic again, as it undoubtedly will, i can still keep up with regular updates, since i know the stalling on the end of this one was pretty obnoxious. i'm only about three chapters into the next one so far but i'll get there!

Reviewer: JamesSirius
Date: 06/30/12 2:07
Chapter: Way Back Home

THIS IS THE BEST FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ, ESPECIALLY SINCE IT'S JAMES AND LILY. I love every single bit of it, and thank you so much for writing it! I'm sure we all enjoyed it very much! :D

Reviewer: RoseHyperionMalfoy
Date: 06/25/12 17:46
Chapter: Three Months Later

I have followed your story faithfully since you started posting Trickster and now Stars Apart and it's my favourite story on the site! You are an amazing writer and can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/23/12 22:38
Chapter: Three Months Later

I am sad that this is comng to an end :-( Great story and I will try to follow the sequel when you get around to it!

Author's Response: aww thanks, hopefully it can be soon!

Reviewer: snidget76
Date: 06/23/12 21:23
Chapter: Three Months Later

I really liked this story, though I'm pretty sure there are some loose ends and questions that haven't been answered. The ending was sweet.

Author's Response: oh i know, there's stuff that is going to be continued into the sequel :) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 06/22/12 19:30
Chapter: Three Months Later

Yay!!! Such a good ending! I love the way that you write each character and I can't wait until the next installment. Great work!!!

Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 06/18/12 21:51
Chapter: Graduation

So great!!! I really love the way that you have written Sirius and Regulus' relationship!! They are two of my favorite characters and I really liked how they get along in this fic. It's how I had always thought of them. :) Great work and I'm really glad that you're back! :)

Reviewer: harryfan221
Date: 06/16/12 1:46
Chapter: Way Back Home

So good

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/14/12 16:55
Chapter: Graduation

Entertaining end of the year prank. Cannot wait for the epilogue :-)

Reviewer: Hermione Jean Weasley
Date: 06/14/12 16:39
Chapter: Graduation

Yay! I'm so happy you came back to update, I absolutely love this chapter!

Reviewer: FlameNox
Date: 05/23/12 0:06
Chapter: Preparations

I have just read through this whole fic--you're an amazing writer! I especially appreciate you don't prostitute your pen to get people to read your work. Please though, I am dying to read the next chapter--update soon!

Author's Response: ahhh it's actually almost done, I promise--I graduated last weekend (!!!!!) and sort of fell off the face of the earth for awhile. but it should be up any day :) thanks!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:59
Chapter: Preparations

Hmm Very interesting character Regulus is... Cannot wait for the next chapter :-)

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