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Reviewer: BrokenPromise
Date: 03/03/12 23:00
Chapter: Murder for Love

Just... wow. I don't think I need to say anymore.

Author's Response: :) I am terrible at structured poetry. This review made me grin!

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 10/11/10 14:59
Chapter: Murder for Love

AGHHHHH!

Far too scary!

Great poem, Natalie. You've managed to encapsulate their story in a marvellous set of haikus that are really atmospheric. I love the last haiku the most - the line 'Ghosts for angels.' is spine-tinglingly good.

Great job. I know what a hard task this was. Good luck in the triathlon. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Ooh! I am happy to hear it scared you. It was meant to create some sort of a horrific effect on the readers. The last one is my favourite as well. :D:D Thanks for the review!

~Natalie.

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 10/11/10 13:49
Chapter: Murder for Love

Ooh, those are so neat! I can't believe you told an entire story in five little haikus. That's amazing. Great word choices and a wonderful way to use the quote. And the title is perfect. Lovely job, Natalie! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks! The haikus did kick my behind a bit, but ... now that I am doing epigrams, in hindsight, they weren't that bad. Glad you liked it, though. :)

~Natalie.

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