Reviews For Sticks & Stones
Reviewer: ravenlunatic96
Date: 11/24/10 20:55
Chapter: One-Shot

I liked how this story was non-romancy and more like Draco just needing to talk to somebody. At first when she woke up in the room I was like "how did she not remember this and mention it?" but then I read the end and I was like "ahhh. ok." Overall, I liked it alot, and I think it is a very good angst fic. Maybe a little more...something...

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it =] I had fun writing it and was stuck towards the end but it fixed itself very nicely. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/16/10 18:06
Chapter: One-Shot

very very good!!

Author's Response: Thanks! XD

Reviewer: littlewolf
Date: 10/14/10 18:19
Chapter: One-Shot

this is awesome. i think that draco might opt for cigar rather than cigarettes - only coz he seems like the kind of guy who will opt for "high-class". it's also slightly weird how hermione recognizes the brand immediately, but beyond that - awesome. very well written. the final part where she appeals to him was poignant, as well as ending the story with "Obliviate!". very nice.

Author's Response: I did consider using cigars instead of cigarettes but he's a teenager and I didn't see him running around with cigars while trying to fix the cabinet. I did choose a brand of cigarettes that is considered high-class. Also, let's just say that Hermione recognized it 'cause her father smokes or something inanely similar to that. Lol. Thanks for reviewing!

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