Reviewer: eniroc
Date: 04/13/11 5:57
Chapter: Prologue

Excellent story. Well written and suspensful.. Can't wait for the next chappie

Author's Response: Thank you again, eniroc! I have had half of the next chapter written now for two months, but real life stepped in and mobbed me! Good news is that the end is in sight for a series of deadlines with my job that have kept me running non-stop since Christmas - so I hope to get up a new chapter at some point in the not so distant future. Thanks for sticking with the story! :)

Reviewer: eniroc
Date: 01/18/11 10:49
Chapter: Prologue

very good story. Can't wai to read more. Well written and suspenseful.

Author's Response: Thank you, eniroc! I've been on leave what with Christmas and law school applications due, but the next chapter is in the queue!

Reviewer: msk8
Date: 11/03/10 2:03
Chapter: Prologue

Awesome. I love the part abot the rain, especially the last line-- "It should have been raining." It just gives the whole prologue an ominousous feeling it wouldn't have otherwise.
~Megan

Author's Response: Thanks Megan! That was the mood I was aiming for, so I'm glad that's what you took away from it. :)

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 11/02/10 16:19
Chapter: Prologue

Love it! An excellent first chapter. Not much happens, but it leads me wanting more, so I will continue to read, and await the next chapter with much anticipation!

Author's Response: Thanks, Sdogg! It's deliberately vague, but it definitely sets the tone for the rest of the story. Glad you liked it! :)

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