Reviews For Apathy
Reviewer: Lily Glenn
Date: 12/15/10 13:03
Chapter: Apathy

the ending was amazing :)

Author's Response: Thank you :) xx

Reviewer: hermy008
Date: 11/06/10 18:44
Chapter: Apathy

wow, that was intense. incredibly sad, of course, but the imagery was beautiful. its very interesting to read about what could have happened if voldy won. all i can say is, after reading this, thank god jk had the right side win in the end. :)

Author's Response: LOL, thanks so much :) xx

Reviewer: leftrightmiddle
Date: 11/05/10 18:05
Chapter: Apathy

I have read many stories on the prediction on the outcome if Voldemort won, but making it from Dracos POV made this very interesting. My only suggestion would be next time to use more indirect characterization. I really enoyed this!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) xxx

Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 11/05/10 14:34
Chapter: Apathy

This was really well written. I thought it was interesting to look at it from Draco's perspective, rather than one of the Weasley's or someone like that. He has that different position of having supported Voldemort but now suffering just as everyone else under his regime.

Especially your description of Hermione at the end was chilling. - "all he could think was that it was as if somebody had gouged them out of her sockets with sharp fingernails, leaving behind only two nasty, bloody hollows" - that's a very powerful line.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've never written a story from Draco's pov before, so I'm pleased you like it :) xx

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