Reviewer: sisena
Date: 05/27/12 22:31
Chapter: The Start Of A Life Of Lies

This is really good! I love how it looks into Draco's perspective and shows his thoughts and what makes him say the things he does. Nice work!

Reviewer: LoonyLupin
Date: 12/30/11 23:29
Chapter: The Start Of A Life Of Lies

This makes me wonder if Draco would've dared to betray his family, like his aunt Andromeda did, for a good reason. Nice look at his side of that first conversation. J.K. Rowling mentioned that he reminded Harry of Dudley, and that's pretty true. I can see that here, as well! Wonderful job :)

Reviewer: Sarcasm-Oh Joy
Date: 12/19/11 7:01
Chapter: The Start Of A Life Of Lies

I really like this fic, it's so nicely written and has excellent voice. (I think, I'm just repeating what my English teacher says, but I still like the fic a lot, I just don't know what to say what I like about it) Mu favorite line is "'Oh, sorry.' I replied, keeping my voice devoid of all emotion, in case the jealousy crept in." It's so witty and funny. The only problem I have is that this is an AU fic, I kinda wish it was canon. But alas. Anywho, love the fic!

Reviewer: Hermione Granger Weasley
Date: 01/23/11 10:26
Chapter: The Start Of A Life Of Lies

You should continue with this, not just a one-shot!

Reviewer: nodeath4curious_cats
Date: 12/01/10 14:38
Chapter: The Start Of A Life Of Lies

A very fresh premise, and the hint of anxiety in Narcissa as she leaves him to go to Knockturn Alley felt very real. I understand your overall message, but the last sentence was a bit abrupt. The meeting did not really build to a climax such that he would be "preparing to live a lie" with such finality.

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