Reviewer: EverettePenrose
Date: 12/23/10 17:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Okay that last review was a bit spontaneous and not very good, so I'll rewrite it. I like the story- well written and pretty hot O.o You should really write more!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing it, and I got to explore two brand new characters in depth and a few others in a more minor role. I don't know if I'll be shipping these two again, but I definitely intend to write about these two in some other capacity in the future.

Thanks for the review. Have a nice night!

~Jess

Reviewer: EverettePenrose
Date: 12/23/10 17:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

WRITE MORE DAMNIT!!!

Author's Response: Sorry, dearie. This story is only meant to be a one-shot. Maybe if the birthday girl for whom it was written wants a sequel, I'll add to it next year, but for the time being, it's going to remain a short story. :/

Reviewer: hestiajones
Date: 12/19/10 7:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

That Slash warning is annoying, isn't it? Urgh. It spoils the surprise element. But, getting to the story, I have to say, it was BRILLIANT! You need to continue this, my friend. I absolutely demand a sequel, even though I'm scared your Terry might get stuck in my head before I start my own project on him.

I think this is one of those fics where your sense of humour - the one which I obsess over ahaha - comes across strongly. Douche!Michael made me laugh so much. But the rest was also as enjoyable, and I particularly enjoyed the dialogue. My only complaint is that you cheated us of some smut. Hee hee hee.

Really liked it, and you must write more.

~Natalie

Author's Response:

Hehe, this was really just a product of me picking the most random freaking characters that came to me and paired them together for Emma's enjoyment. If I'd have put smut in there, it would've been a really, really long story, and I was already running late for work. XD

I just decided that not everyone is nice and there had to be at least one a******, and that just happened to be Michael. I don't know if that's my own personal canon or not, but it might be. I'll decide later when I write about his son, Garrett, who'll be James Jr's bestie.

I might write more on this story here and there, add a chapter perhaps. It might become my writers' block story like Harmony was supposed to be. I rather do like these two together, even hough i tend to ship Theo/Susan and Terry/dead.

Thanks for stopping by, dearing. I heart you muchly.

~Jess

Reviewer: welshdevondragon
Date: 12/16/10 19:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hello Jess!
That was a fun story! It's annoying that because you have to put the slash warning on you know that something is going to happen. I love the characterisation, particularly of Theo (who I've always liked- partly because I think that's such a cool name). Their reactions are very realistic. I love your dialogue as well- it's so real. Arg essay to write not reviews even if the story is excellent. Thanks as always and happy birthday to Emma!!

Author's Response:

Ho, Alex! Long time, no see!

You know, to be honest, this was just the first random minor character pairing I came up with, because that's Emma's favourite. I have learnt lately that I have a rarepair fixation, and this is just a new extension of that. I don't expect the Slytherins who left before the Battle to feel bad about not staying, but they were still deeply affected by it. Add to that being 'different'... I sort of expect Theo to be a little screwed up. And Terry is just in the mix with everyone else.

Did I put a slash tag on there? Heh. I'll be sure to take it off if I did. I don't use a 'Slash' tag unless I actually have written slash. Gay characters =/= slash. It bothers me, too.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, plus hugs for the recommendation in Fiction Junction. :D

~Jess

Reviewer: Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x
Date: 12/16/10 7:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Poo. I hadn't realised MNFF had chopped my review. Anyway, the basics were: JESS. I

Author's Response:

I think it chopped your review again, but I think it had something to do with the little heart thing. Anything in brackets is picked up as coding, hence why it's chopping it off. I am just glad, or hoping rather, that you like it. :D

~Jess

Reviewer: mantaray
Date: 12/15/10 23:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

I am a long-time reader of Mugglenet fanfiction, but this is my first time commenting in any capacity. I have been genuinely enjoying your writing over the past month or so, but I have to say that you have made a huge mistake with this story- namely, that you seem to be creating such compelling characters with no intention of considering a continuation of this story. Please don't give up on Boot and Nott! It is a pairing that I would certainly never have come up with myself, but the characters are so not-fleshed-out in JKR's canon that I can't help but be curious as to what will happen next. Please, don't make this a one-shot! And many thanks to the birthday girl for inspiring this wonderful story.

Author's Response:

Lol, wow. I never in my life expected to hear the phrase 'don't give up on Boot and Nott'. I'm not going to lie... this was just a random pairing that I came up with because the birthday girl loves slashy things involving minor characters. And me, personally, I really just love obscure characters (hence my gigantic Katie/Oliver romance) and knowing the stories behind them, the things that JKR would never bother thinking about. I'm really glad you appreciate it. :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

~Jess

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