Reviews For The Proposal
Reviewer: DontSayImpossible
Date: 06/07/11 3:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very sweet, I liked how Draco teased her a bit at the start :)

Reviewer: neonmagic
Date: 05/02/11 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

aww! that was too cute, I'm a sucker for anything Draco romance related, and i have to say,you should consider another chaoter, breaking it to the Weasleys, or the wedding : )

Reviewer: welshdevondragon
Date: 04/20/11 23:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

I don't usually read fluff but have just written his proposal to Asteria, so was intrigued by how you'd write his -"proposal" to Ginny. I love the fact that she proposed to him (sort of) rather than the more traditional other way round. I also love the way both Draco and Ginny are completely in character, albeit a redeemed Draco (but I think he gets redeemed so that's all right). Nevertheless he has the same confidence and smarminess of the books Draco. I really liked the line about Malfoy's emotional lives being complicated. It is, but being with Ginny in your story seems to have made him better, and at least he knows he wants her.

I like Ginny's mix of romantic impulses, and yet unromantic beliefs (like saying no-one offered their hand or their heart any more) and I think she would be an Austen fan. Maybe Hermione introduced the books to her?

The couple's dialogue was great. It was flirtatious and fun and never sounded contrived or unbelievable. This was a really sweet, fluffy piece and yes, you're right in you're notes that it deserves more reviews. I hope I've helped the balance a bit :) Alex x

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 03/12/11 17:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good! I loved it!

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