Reviewer: srhittson
Date: 09/05/13 16:32
Chapter: Waking

I love the story. It was so sweet and cute and sad and happy

Reviewer: Sarcasm-Oh Joy
Date: 12/27/11 5:59
Chapter: Waking

I'm crying. Sorry. And YOU ARE A FREAKING AWESOME PERSON FOR WRITING THIS!! I think I was yelling at the computer about how "Dora is alive!" and "You have to hope Arthur!"

I really love the scene where they met, I'm going to go read it again now. It was so beautiful and foreshadowed so much to come. I also liked the proposal scene a lot. I LOVED how Remus was so happy when she reduced all his points to smithereens. Again, I was yelling. ("He loves her so much! GAAAAAHHHHH!![Yes I say Gah])

And chapter five was so emotionally intense. I started crying intensely and hugged my pillow, rocking back and forth telling it, "It will be all right, it will be all right."

And the battle scenes were so scary and beautiful at the same time. And crazy Bellatrix is crazy. I was kind of half-expecting Dora to yell at any moment, "NOT MY HUSBAND, YOU ------!!!" or something. Maybe Remus? That would be interesting.

Oh, and how often do you hear the words, "I loved the death scene."? Cause your about to hear them. I loved the death scene! It was, if they had died, the perfect way for them to go out, together. And holding hands? That just sealed the deal. *Sings off key* Together until the eeeeennnnnnddddd!

Did I mention how happy I am that Remus and Dora are ALIVE?!?!?!?!?! I will tell you how happy, AMAZINGLY HAPPY!!!!

Kay I'm going to wrap this up now or else you'll get mad at me. You are an awesome writer! Keep up the good work! :D

(I apologize for the excessive hyperness of this review, I just loved it so much! SQUEE!!)

Reviewer: bk64
Date: 07/14/11 6:43
Chapter: Waking

So i've just read all 5 of these chapters. I really loved chapters 1-4. It was a great tribute to the lives and relationship of Tonks and Remus. However I fully believe that trying to have them come back to life in some way is like trying to rewrite Romeo and Juliet. They made a sacrifice and gave their lives so that their son could live in a world better than the one in which they lived. Attempting to change that in some way, i believe negates that and lessens it in some way.

Again, i really liked the other chapters, just not your choice of ending. If you'd had it that they had moved on into the after life and found each other there, and had them acknowledge that they had done all that they could've and that their son could now grow up without fear, that in my opinion would've been fitting.
thanks for listening and writing! I like your writing style, its easy to read! I also like the way that you had them "die" fighting together, protecting each other, it was almost how i imagined it! thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed most of it. I really went back and forth over what to do for an ending, and eventually decided to try it this way and see what happened, but I see your point and have considered doing something ending it that way. Thanks for the compliments and suggestions!

Reviewer: DobbyFan96
Date: 07/09/11 20:36
Chapter: Recalling

I have got to say, of all the fanfics i have read so far (and i have read quiye a few) this is my favorite! I apsolutely hated when they died in the book. I got so into the story that my heart stopped when Remus was first waking up and stopped again when tonks awoke. It is an EXTREMELY well written story, especially for an AU type fic, which i normally dont like! Thanks so much for sharing this!

Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot! I don't usually like AU fics myself, but I'm glad I wrote this one. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for telling me so! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Evangeline_DeMore
Date: 06/05/11 7:47
Chapter: Waking

This is my favorite fan fiction! Oh they just had to have lived I can't stand the pain otherwise! Do you agree? This was just an all around amazing story! Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for writing it! ~Evangeline

Author's Response: Thank you!!! You just made my life with that review! This story is my own little happy world, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you again!

Reviewer: illet_1982
Date: 05/01/11 2:38
Chapter: Remembering

One little remark. Tonks could not celebrate Cristmas in Gryffindor tower, she was a Hufflepuff.

Author's Response: Thanks, I didn't know that at the time of the writing.

Reviewer: illet_1982
Date: 04/30/11 9:45
Chapter: Seeking

Sorry, I placed the review at wrong place.
Thanks for the story. I have enjoed it. Especially thanks for the part discribed Lupin and Tonks's deaths, because I really missed it in the book. Impatiently wait for continuation.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I tried to answer some of the questions I had, and this is my thoughts on those happenings. The last chapter will be posted as soon as possible. Thanks again for your review!

Reviewer: illet_1982
Date: 04/30/11 9:42
Chapter: Recalling

Thanks for the story. I have enjoed it. Especially thanks for the part discribed Lupin and Tonks's deaths, because I really missed it in the book. Impatiently wait for continuation.

Reviewer: BlueJoker
Date: 04/20/11 6:16
Chapter: Recalling

Hmm, watch your Americanisms ("dumb") and your paragraphs are pretty chunky, but you have a really lovely interpretation of Remus's character and a sweet, in-character idea of him and Tonks meeting. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely have room for improvement, and I'll watch for those things in the future. Thank you so much for your thoughts and suggestions!

Reviewer: Lunafreak
Date: 04/11/11 19:56
Chapter: Recalling

Really good. I can already tell this story Is going to be very good. I will be waiting for an update.

Author's Response: Thank you! I will be sending in the next chapters as soon as I can.

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