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Name: dongbei (Signed) · Date: 05/14/17 0:12 · For: Black And White
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Name: filiusflitwick45 (Signed) · Date: 08/15/12 3:38 · For: Black And White
Did Draco hang himself in the end. That is so twisted...


Name: HeRmiONe923 (Signed) · Date: 07/16/11 17:32 · For: Black And White
Draco and Hermione? I liked the writing of the story. Good job. :)

Author's Response: Yes, this is Draco and Hermione, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this, thank you very much for the review :)


Name: SheWolf137 (Signed) · Date: 05/20/11 9:35 · For: Black And White
hermione and draco?

Author's Response: Yep :)


Name: Lilys_Boy (Signed) · Date: 05/13/11 10:09 · For: Black And White
I love how you make it a Draco & Hermione (correct me if im wrong, pls) but still leave it open for doubt as to who it really is.

Author's Response: Yep, it is Draco and Hermione :) Glad you liked it, thanks for the review.


Name: Anastasi (Signed) · Date: 05/10/11 5:05 · For: Black And White
This is a really impressive story, I love the way it's writtne from first person, and the short, almost snappy sentences give it an air of being thought in someone's head rapidly, as if re-living a memory. It puts me in mind of Severus and Lily, except obviously more extreme, but I'm unsure whether you meant it to relfelct their story or not, as it was the male in this story who was betrayed, not the female.

I would have liked to have a couple of names of te charcters at the end, perhapas, jsut to give them a little more personality, are they perhaps decendants of people from the original stories?

Anywho, nitpicking aside I thought it was an excellent read, very well done :)

Anastasi

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. The reason there are no names at the end is because it is written from Draco's perspective, a kind of last night before his death. Thanks for the review :)


Name: LunaLestrange00 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 12:44 · For: Black And White
Wow. That was awesome, and very dark. I liked it, and very well written. But it did make Hermione look like a btch. I don't think she would ever be that evil.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, thanks for the review. In regards to nasty Hermione, I can totally see how that would come across, but in my mind Draco has several screws loose, and has completely misread the relationship. Hugs, kisses on cheeks and squeezing hands (maybe all for support) to Hermione might be seen as friendly, but seem like a burgeoning romantic relationship to Draco.


Name: Lovely Dirigible Plum (Signed) · Date: 04/28/11 22:03 · For: Black And White
wow, that was dark.
and im guessing this was draco and hermione? and that other dude was ron? amazingly written, very powerful, VERY tragic.

Author's Response: Yes, this was Draco, Hermione and Ron, well done :) Thank you so much for the brilliant comments!


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