Reviews For Moons
Reviewer: hanname
Date: 01/16/13 13:29
Chapter: Conjunction

I liked the story. Too tired to analyze.

Author's Response: Thanks
There is nothing to analyse. It's Hansel and Gretel. :-D
-N-

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 05/09/12 17:49
Chapter: Conjunction

I really enjoyed this look into the life of Lavender and Mark. Those poor boys have no clue what happened, which is a good thing!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. They know something happenned, but they have no idea what. -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 05/06/12 22:51
Chapter: Conjunction

Very good! A nice conclusion to another wonderful story from you. :)

Looking forward to more stories from you! Cheers,
Katie

Author's Response: Thanks.
I hope to get the next chapter of H&P into the queue soon, and after that, A&S, probably. Two chaptered stories finished (this and "Haunted House") so I shouldn't start another, should I?
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 04/28/12 19:46
Chapter: Luminosity

Glad you got them down at last, being a werewolf does give Lavender a nice edge.
Poor Mark it can't be easy being married to Lavender but there are compensations!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Like Mark and Lavender, this story has been left hanging for too long. Expect the sixth and final chapter soon. -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/25/12 5:19
Chapter: Luminosity

Brilliant!!

Author's Response: Thanks -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 04/24/12 19:56
Chapter: Luminosity

This was quite good. Mark makes Lavender better and I've enjoyed what you've done with their little family. I wonder what the Auror Office will do.

Looking forward to more...Of any story. :)
- Katie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This particular glimpse into the Moons' life is almost over. The next chapter will be the last, and in it, you'll find out what the Auror Office does.
I've just submitted Strangers 15, will that do?
-N-

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 04/24/12 18:04
Chapter: Luminosity

What a great Chapter! I am so glad that Mark and Lavender are no longer hanging. I was wondering if she was going to transform to help save them. The three muggle boys sure got an eye full, not only with the magical world but also with Lavender, I bet Mark is glad he can Obliviate that part from their memories lol. Great Chapter as always, can't wait to see what the Auror office says.

Author's Response: Thanks
So are they, I'm sure. The boys did get an eyeful, Mark will do his best to sort things out. The next chapter won't take so long to submit. I want to finish at least one of my chaptered stories, and this is it! Thenext chapter will be the last.
-N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 01/23/12 2:48
Chapter: Umbra

While not a fan of Lav in the books, I do like what you have done with her.

Great cliffy here, can't wait for more on the Moons (as we know we are getting more info on Lav becoming a werewolf in H & P).

Keep it coming!!!
Edyeb

Author's Response: Thanks. Lavender’s backstory is threaded through a lot of my stuff (starting with Tales of the Battle). She stars (if that’s the right word) in MIT, MLT, Haunted House, Bare and Moon (I’ve no idea if you’ve read them). I have a MIT novel length story (called Exsanguination) planned, but I won’t start it until I finish one or two other stories. -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 01/14/12 22:14
Chapter: Umbra

Ohh, this is getting good! Suspenseful and intriguing. :) Looking forward to more!
-Katie

Author's Response: Thanks.
Hopefully you won't have to wait so long for the next chapter.
-N-

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 10/16/11 19:30
Chapter: Penumbra

Ohhh that was a good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. More soon. -N-

Reviewer: Harrypotterlover1
Date: 10/05/11 22:39
Chapter: Penumbra

Finish it soon!

Author's Response: Finish it, certainly. Soon? as soon as possible. -N-

Reviewer: Harrypotterlover1
Date: 10/05/11 22:33
Chapter: Perturbation

Lavender should not leave him on their anniversary!

Author's Response: Thats what Mark thinks, too. -N-

Reviewer: NoTagBacks
Date: 10/02/11 22:55
Chapter: Penumbra

... and your stories always encourage me to research British "culture" (I just watched several Bombardier videos on YouTube).

Author's Response: The Bombadier ads are Rik Mayall (aka Peeves, apparently, though his scenes were deleted) doing a version of his Blackadder character "Lord Flashheart". British humour. -N-

Reviewer: NoTagBacks
Date: 10/02/11 21:25
Chapter: Penumbra

Another new chapter. Good.
I've read a few post-war Lavender stories; your characterization of her is one of the best. Sometimes I love her and sometimes she's an annoying bitch. That makes her real and interesting.
There isn't much backstory here on motherhood for Lavender - is there more coming later? I think it would help fill in the gap between "Moon" and this story, as well as showing her soft side that contrasts with the beast of her transformation.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I have a timeline for Lavender from the battle to this story. I have similar feelings towards her too.
Lavender the mother will be pretty annoying (I have several ideas) and I feel sorry for little Violet who will be dressed in frills and flounces. I have several Lavender stories part-written. I knew when she gets bitten and when (and where) she first meets Mark.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 10/01/11 0:30
Chapter: Penumbra

Oh so scary, don't go in Lavender!
Please up date soon so we can find out what happens next.
I do love your Lavender she is lovely and Mark is a perfect husband for her.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This is another story which is being cooked very slowly. The next chapter (Umbra) will need several re-drafts before it's ready.
I really must write the story about how Mark and Lavender met, mustn't I?
-N-

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 09/30/11 20:54
Chapter: Penumbra

I like it a lot and can't wait for an update! Will they be able to handle the hag? Will the three muggles try to help the hag? I can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The next chapter is drafted, but it still needs a lot of work. Will they be able to handle the hag? This is Lavender's fairy tale. -N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 09/30/11 20:01
Chapter: Inclination

I must say, I like this story better the more you write.

It is nice the way you have matured Lavender through your stories, I don't think they did her justice in the films.

Mark is as always is a great addition to the Potterverse.

Edyeb

Author's Response: My Lavender stories are all a little odd. I blame Lavender (most people do, for almost everything) :-D I think that Lavender and Mark make a great team. -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/30/11 18:48
Chapter: Penumbra

Awesome!!

Author's Response: Thanks -N-

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 09/30/11 16:02
Chapter: Penumbra

I love Lavender's character - and I like how you retained who she was in some of your previous stories as the flighty single member of the DA in her character as a married woman and mother. Enjoying it!
-Joy

Author's Response: Thank you.
I try to keep everyone in character as they mature. I like Lavender, she's brave, and good in a crisis, but she still annoys me. -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/17/11 16:52
Chapter: Perturbation

Awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks. -N-

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