Reviewer: FearlessFlyer
Date: 01/12/12 21:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the way you’ve portrayed Susan in your story. Hufflepuff characters are often written off as dull workhorses, and giving Susan a love for her comedy programs and music adds dimension to her character. I can see her getting involved in a more serious relationship with Robin, and hope it works out for them J.

Author's Response: I'm a Hufflepuff myself, so I can't write off the canon Puffs! (Love them to death actually). And we'll see how it goes with Robin. :D Thanks for reviewing.

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