Reviews For Allies in Shadows
Reviewer: Immoral_Decadence
Date: 01/10/12 19:39
Chapter: The Serpent and the Lioness

First off, I simply must say that you are rather talented when it comes to weaving a created character so effortlessly into the world of Harry Potter we all know so well.
Now that I've said that, I would also like to commend you on how truly fascinating Killian is. As someone who has always leaned towards Ravenclaw but admired the traits of Slytherin, I find Killian to be the perfect balance of both and complicated in a way that manages to still be endearing. How he is obviously intelligent and talented, yet wishes to remain sort of anonymous is something I can see Hermione being drawn to very easily, as it is safe, yet unpredictable.
All and all I look forward to reading many more of your works.
Sincerely a devoted reader,
Immoral Decadence

Reviewer: LoonyLupin
Date: 12/12/11 3:47
Chapter: The Serpent and the Lioness

For most of the story, their relationship was really subtle. I like how unique it was because of that. I can picture Hermione kind of "taking a walk on the bad side"!

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 08/22/11 8:09
Chapter: The Serpent and the Lioness

So good!! keep writing!

Reviewer: Carmen SanDiego
Date: 07/17/11 15:18
Chapter: Where Loyalties Lie

i really love this story! killian kind of reminds of harry and draco put together. i really like him! great story, cant wait to see how it ends

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 06/19/11 9:26
Chapter: Trolls in the Dungeons

So good! please update soon!

Reviewer: iamjustafan
Date: 06/18/11 10:13
Chapter: Where Loyalties Lie

Sorry, I meant the twins have a meeting by the deck

Author's Response: Yes, that was definitely a chapter in this story. To answer your question, the entire story is complete and posted in a few places. I would recommend Snitchseeker. Currently it has the most refined and edited version of the story. But it is also on The Petulant Poetess in a slightly less edited version. Either way, I hope you enjoy! Thanks for reading - AD

Reviewer: iamjustafan
Date: 06/18/11 10:01
Chapter: Where Loyalties Lie

I don't remember the chapter, but I remember reading (without wanting to spoil the story) a part were thetwink havea meeting by the deck in order to sell their products. Do you have this story finnished, because I wish I could read it all. If you have posted in another page could you please say which? Hope you finnish the story soon if you haven't already.

Reviewer: iamjustafan
Date: 06/11/11 12:48
Chapter: Where Loyalties Lie

i really like this story, but what happened you had much more chapers published and then the story vanished

Author's Response: I did? When was this? In honesty, I lose track of what I've posted from time to time, terrible as that sounds. It's possible that somehow I accidentally took every off. I don't remember doing so, but it is definitely possible. I'll be sure not to make that mistake again ;)

Reviewer: iamjustafan
Date: 06/11/11 12:48
Chapter: Where Loyalties Lie

i really like this story, but what happened you had much more chapers published and then the story vanished

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 06/11/11 9:16
Chapter: Where Loyalties Lie

I think this is going to be a very good story! please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks :) The next chapter is in the queue, so hopefully it will be up soon.

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