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Name: Equinox Chick (Signed) · Date: 11/21/11 14:21 · For: Chapter 1
Hello there. I like this poem. It's simple but tells a very good story about Rita. I was impressed with the rhyming here because it doesn't seem at all forced but fllows very well.

Staring each stanza with the word 'Beetle' was a great idea. It gives the impression that we're reading about an 'it' with no personality, so when you change it to 'Skeeter' it feels far more forceful that we're reading about a woman.

Excellent poem, I enjoyed reading it. ~Carole~


Name: LukiLaeta (Signed) · Date: 06/19/11 16:09 · For: Chapter 1
Excellent poem, especially becasue it's about someone we rarely hear about anymore! Love the rhyming, nicely done.


Name: blueowl (Signed) · Date: 06/18/11 6:22 · For: Chapter 1
Good poem! i haven't seen too many about rita skeeter, but you pulled it off perfectly!


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