Reviews For Severus's Prince
Reviewer: Dad
Date: 05/18/13 12:56
Chapter: A Wounded Heart

Just came across this story. I hope you can manage to update. I like Xavier.

Reviewer: selene31
Date: 01/13/12 1:08
Chapter: Lifelong Changes

i absolutely love this story please continue to write :)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 12/25/11 5:52
Chapter: Lifelong Changes

Brilliant!!

Reviewer: Redwing
Date: 12/22/11 5:44
Chapter: A New House, A New Life

Not a bad chapter. I like your characterization, and your writing is smooth.
Now, I don't know a ton about babies, but I have covered developmental psychology, and some things about your little newborn seem off. For one, newborn babies can't focus on anything more than a little bit in front of their face, and laughter is a bit beyond them, I believe. Also, babies' eyes start out blue and then slowly change to their adult color over a few months. You can probably find a short summary of what happens at each stage - newborn, two months, six months, etc - on google if you're interested. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I used a few different sites to get an idea about the development, but I wanted to showcase that he was not a normal child since he is a young wizard. Some of the things that Xavier does is a little behind his age, but according to the sites I saw, not too outrageous.

Besides, from reading Harry Potter, I got the impression that wizards and witches develop differently. For example, when Dumbledore went to tell Tom Riddle about Hogwarts, the head of the orphanage told Dumbledore that Tom was odd even as a baby. How he hardly cried and everything. For that reason, later on in my story I make a point to explain my idea that the reason Xavier seems to do something that he shouldn't be able to do at his age is because he is aided by magic.

In truth though, I didn't know it took months for the eyes to change. Though, I still like the idea that Xavier's changed so quickly, but I thank you for teaching me something new. :)

I hope you like the story enough to keep reading. And, keep the comments coming, I love feedback.

Reviewer: selene31
Date: 11/30/11 19:49
Chapter: Moments Under The Sun

great story:) we need more!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/16/11 20:34
Chapter: Moments Under The Sun

Very awesome!!!!! Love this!!! Snape as a daddy just makes me smile!!

Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 08/28/11 2:08
Chapter: The Seal of Fate

I'm intrigued by where this will lead. The third chapter was particurly interesting. Voldemort was written very well, though I can't imaging Lucius walking with bounce in his step!

Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 08/18/11 23:38
Chapter: The Seal of Fate

the premise of this story is really intriguing. i am eager to read more. but am glad that you aren't forgetting your other story either ;-)

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 08/18/11 13:50
Chapter: The Seal of Fate

Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see what happens in the next one. I hope you know how much I enjoy reading this story. Keep them coming.

Author's Response:

Author's Response: I really glad that you are enjoying this story. Mugglenet is giving me some hassle with my next chapter so it's taking me a little longer but it's coming soon.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/16/11 14:14
Chapter: The Seal of Fate

Love it!!!

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 08/04/11 18:31
Chapter: A New House, A New Life

Severus is being so caring it is nice to see a different side of him. Keep the great chapters coming.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/04/11 13:37
Chapter: A New House, A New Life

I am so hooked! Love this story!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/29/11 10:52
Chapter: The Birth of His Son

Oh yes!! I'm hooked! Excellent!!

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/26/11 14:36
Chapter: The Birth of His Son

That was a great first chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Midnight_Rose
Date: 07/26/11 9:28
Chapter: The Birth of His Son

Great story! Please write more!

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