Reviews For Yearning
Reviewer: maggie_95
Date: 07/23/11 7:13
Chapter: Drinks on the House

that was probably the best Neville- Hannah I've read (although I haven't read many, to be honest)
but it was cute and made me smile, which is all I'm looking for in a fanfic :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Ascendio
Date: 07/22/11 0:20
Chapter: Drinks on the House

"It's funny how the silly things often seem the most important." (Don't know if I quoted that correctly...frankly it's 3:30 am and I'm surprised I can even keep my fingers on the keyboard. Sorry. I'm getting side-tracked.) Love that line, it fits in wonderfully with Luna's characterization, something just full of obvious wisdom which other people have over-looked.

I really liked this story, very refreshing and nice, the way you play out how their relationship started. Interesting how you made their friendship start by having him be there for her because of her mum, nice take.

The only nitpick I have is the ending, which seems a little fast, him asking her to marry him, it just seems a tad too rushed.

Also, wonderful characterization of Neville, he seems just like the good old Neville Longbottom from the books. Hannah as well, though she's a minor character, you've derived so much for her and it just seems to suit her perfectly.

Author's Response: Luna's one of the easiest characters for me to write-- you just need to know about weirdness. The ending was a little fast, but Neville would do it that way in my mind. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 07/21/11 15:09
Chapter: Drinks on the House

What a nice story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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