Reviews For Yours
Reviewer: ArchitectOfMyFate
Date: 01/09/14 18:48
Chapter: Yours

Officially my favorite Harry/Draco fic EVER. Everything, from the way it's written, to the characterization, down to how /real/ and tangible you made it feel.

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 07/29/12 1:03
Chapter: Yours

Wow. Okay, this is not my favorite pairing. I’ve read it a few times, and it can be done well, which it is here.

My only issue with your fic is some of the characterization of Draco. I like your Draco, and a lot of his personality is very canon, but not all. There are times when he sounds, a lot more like Snape. Draco didn’t grow-up sad and lonely. He had parents who loved him and friends (or minions) at his side. He was never really alone and he talks like he’s never had anyone. I can see him feeling this way in love, but not in life as a whole.

I must say, you are very talented with love scenes. Even at the beginning when Draco and Harry were having what was meant to be meaningless sex, you wrote it so perfectly. The emotions were clear. Later when they were finally coming to terms with how they feel, it was actually heartwarming.

And when it comes to responding to a lover, I think you captured Harry and Draco dead on. Great job with this fic.

Reviewer: AsinineIgnoramusHP
Date: 04/26/12 19:38
Chapter: Yours

While I didn't particularly enjoy the more sexually themed parts, I enjoyed this story as a whole. Beautifully written. I strongly enjoyed the way you made both Draco and Harry vulnerable and strong. Great job. Keep it up!

Reviewer: AHope
Date: 04/21/12 23:15
Chapter: Yours

This is amazing! I hope that you continue to write more. Excellent job

Reviewer: EverettePenrose
Date: 12/04/11 18:07
Chapter: Yours

beautiful.

Reviewer: ilovedrarry101
Date: 08/04/11 19:06
Chapter: Yours

your an amzing writer, i loved this fic. please white some more!! would love to read them

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