Aww happy birthday Ron...what a sweet chapter : ) It is a shame that she doesn't remember certain things about their relationship but it's nice to see them make new memories....update soon!!!
Aww happy birthday Ron...what a sweet chapter : ) It is a shame that she doesn't remember certain things about their relationship but it's nice to see them make new memories....update soon!!!
You are correct in tagging this chapter "fluff" as there seems to be no purpose for it but to interject some physicality into Ron and Hermione's re-developing relationship. Perhaps the content would have been better served had you also intertwined new information into the work; a revelation from the Ministry about Draco? Or Draco's death and the complete release of the spell over Hermione?? This could have happened at a most opportune moment. More content, please...less fluff.
Excited for an update, but wish the chapter was longer...this fic is definitely one of my faves right now. Can't wait to see where you are taking this...update soon!
Ok...we're finally getting to the crux of the matter, aren't we? Draco has to die. No mention of the Dementor's Kiss, which would merely remove his soul from his body. I think this should be a sticking point: if Draco receives the DK, then Hermione doesn't get her memories in full. Should Draco die, Hermione is possibly cured of her memory loss. Interesting conundrum, yes????
This is one of my favorite stories! I love the whole plot of this, though I hope Draco doesn't have to die :'( Partly because if he dies, Hermione's memory will return and the story will be over. I can't wait until Hermione goes to talk to Draco. I wonder whether she will be able to handle having him killed? Who knows what she would do to get Ron back. Please update soon! :)
I'm surprised this chapter is so short; I presume it is the prelude to the ending of the story. If so, please do not disappoint with a rushed ending. A gratifying confrontation between Hermione and Draco is worth the wait! I would prefer to have all of Draco's secrets revealed: how he developed the curse and verification of Hermione's theory would be wonderful. In my mind, I can see Hermione walking out of Draco's cell with the knowledge that she would be getting her memories returned before she was able to leave the island...and Draco coming to the realization that he was no longer protected by his "happy place." A screeching halt...to be graphically blunt...to Hermione's hell as she hears the iron gates close behind her.
Bring on your next chapter as soon as possible.
Author's Response: Hi! thanks for your review. Just so you know, the story is done, it just takes some time to get each chapter posted on this site. There are 21 chapters. I hope you like it in the end!
Aww yeah, Hermione is starting to remember and Ron is spending the night : ) Exactly what I was hoping for! Can't wait for more!!!
I am loving this story...definitely one of the most unique fan fics I've read in awhile. Can't wait to see if the spell can be broken...update soon!
This is such a interesting story...I hope you do not wait too long to post the next chapters!
Just started reading this fic again today and I love it! Please update soon! The locket was a beautiful idea and I hope she begins to remember Ron.
P.S. We have "real estate agents" in England. Not "muggle realtors".
Bit short. The next chapter looks interesting.
Nicely done. The tension, the repetitive confrontations, the glimmer of remembrance...then nothing. Thank you for bringing Ginny into the mix and for using her observations to reveal a vital piece of information. The eye contact is priceless. I'm glad you are posting frequently.
This is a different sort of story and quite sad. How long will it go on for?
Author's Response: This story has 21 chapters :)
