I'm absolutely in love with this story!
Keep up with the great work and, please, give us the next chapter as soon as you can!
Glad to see Draco is finally taking some action...update soon!
Thank you so much for the update! Please keep updating this story :-) I cannot wait to see what happens next! Great chapter
Honestly this story is so good and so well written. You write really well and include just the right amount of vocabulary without sounding pedantic, just the right amount of detail without it being a drag, and just the write amount of plot and emotions. I really really really like this story and that is why I am dying for another chapter. I hope this is encouragement enough just in case you did not want to continue. Please tell your readers when exactly you will be updating the next chapter or if you have the next chapter up on another website that would be awesome as well :) I really enjoyed the depth of everyone's character. And usually Pansy is shown as a bimbo, but I like the fact that she has her own thoughts and insights. Please upload the next chapter as soon as you can!
Author's Response: You have inspired me to check in here. :) Thanks for the lovely review.
Wow. Wow. AWESOME! Gal, I loved the way you wrote the whole 'not-healthy' part. And I just love your writing style! love!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ahhh, I cannot wait for the next chapter to see what happens!!!
Aww, so there is a shred of humanity in Draco that is growing towards Hermione... :-)
Well Draco was taken aback by those remarks. Good job Hermione!
Wonderful chapter :-)
Wow, I didn't see that coming with Draco's son...Or Just and his daughter. I cannot wait to read more chapters!
Well written chapter.
Loved this chapter! Things are really going to get moving...
Oh lovely Bellatrix, Such a sweet and cuddly character! LOL Great chapter
Very curious to know more about this alternate world!
Interesting first chapter. I cannot wait to see what develops!
WOW finally the plot is moving along!!! I can't wait to see what Draco's big idea is...write more soon : )
Omg this is such a dark story. It literally made me cry but I really really liked it and hope you update regularly.
This chapter was a lot more eventful than the last...I am glad to see that Draco is finally breaking down and starting to admit he might be changing, but I would like to see more. Hope to see more direction with the next chapter. I do give you credit for the dark world you have created if the war had gone the other way. Keep it up!
I am really enjoying your story, please continue to write more- I'm hooked!
How did scorpius die?