Reviews For Heiress of Evil
Reviewer: potterhead2965
Date: 09/28/15 9:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

You must be kidding me!!! This is awesomeeeeeeeeeee!!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 04/02/14 13:47
Chapter: Chapter 4

Silly. But good silly.

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 03/31/14 20:42
Chapter: Chapter 4

executioner chic - bahahaha so funny!

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 03/31/14 20:41
Chapter: Chapter 3

This is very funny. I'm glad you are writing it.

Reviewer: William Brennan
Date: 12/23/12 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

Excellent! Absolutely hilarious! Update!!!

Reviewer: Hermione34778
Date: 03/06/12 2:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it I was laughing the whole time!!!!!!!!!!!p.s. Annabel is my BFFs name

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 02/04/12 5:31
Chapter: Chapter 3

I love this story! It's so funny! :D

Reviewer: PeppermintToads
Date: 01/29/12 18:59
Chapter: Chapter 3

This is truly amazing! I loved when Voldemort was driving, but I also liked when the Dursleys were trying to get Voldemort to take Harry! Please continue!

Reviewer: Lost_Robin
Date: 01/17/12 20:12
Chapter: Chapter 2

Please up date soon!

Reviewer: GinnyPottterGranger
Date: 11/28/11 3:25
Chapter: Chapter 2

why aren't there more chapters? this has such a good basis for a longer story. also, why would Annabel blow Harry a kiss? it would be so funny if those two got together... or at least to see Voldemort's reaction :)

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/29/11 22:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

LOL. I love the premise of your story, and I'd really like to see where it goes. It's fun to read stories that aren't completely in canon where voldy is concerned. Obv in the books he doesn't really have any redeeming qualities, but I like stories that write him a bit tongue-in-cheek, w a sense of humor. =) I hope you continue this tale because it def has promise.

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 08/22/11 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is really funny. I love the idea of Voldy being an exasperated parent.I don't think that this has ever been done before. Anyway, you have me interested now, and I hope you'll continue it.

Reviewer: Hopes Mom
Date: 08/18/11 17:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hilarious premise! I laughed and laughed! It is so funny to imagine the Dark Lord who has virtually no patience with his own followers trying to be patient with or understand a teenager! I look forward to more updates - thank you for writing!

Reviewer: abovelevel
Date: 08/17/11 7:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really really funny! Please keep writing and and I will be looking out for updates. You have a great premise here and I cant wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 08/17/11 1:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

I clicked on this story simply because of the absurdity of the idea... and with reassurance from the fact that it was in the humour category that you wouldn't try and take this seriously. And I'm glad I did, because this was both funny and cleverly written.

I loved how you characterised the Dursleys - I really smiled at “I hope they’re not expecting us to pay any medical bills.”. Actually every line including them was good. Also Ernie's Dad was quite like Ernie and Lucius was well-written.

There's just something wonderful about Voldemort announcing to everyone - "I AM SIMPLY HERE TO COLLECT MY DAUGHTER. PLEASE RESPECT MY FAMILY'S PRIVACY AND LET US HAVE OUR MOMENT IN PEACE. THANK YOU." - because it couldn't really ever happen.

Anyway, this chapter made me laugh and I'm intrigued to see how you continue it.


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