Reviews For The Untold Story
Reviewer: Phoenix Song114
Date: 06/20/12 21:00
Chapter: A Taste of His Own Medicine

Haha James got a taste of his own medicine! Like this story its great!

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 12/18/11 3:10
Chapter: Anytime

Cute!! Liked it. Stupid Avery.

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 11/13/11 17:26
Chapter: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

I really really really liked this chapter!

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 10/25/11 21:28
Chapter: A Festive Occasion

Loved it, loved it, loved it! :)

Author's Response: thank you! (:

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 09/17/11 16:06
Chapter: Peacock Tails and Firewhiskey

Great chapter. I wonder what happened to poor Alex. :( I'm guessing something not good? Can't wait for chapter 4

Author's Response: I know, poor little guy :( I kind of snuck out of that one because I couldn't think of what to do to him... but thank you for your review (:

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 09/05/11 13:34
Chapter: A Moment of Peace

I don't think you need to change the story at all. :) I like it just the way it is.

Author's Response: Thanks (:

Reviewer: apmann
Date: 08/30/11 9:05
Chapter: A Moment of Peace

this is really good! i really enjoyed it! please finish it!

Author's Response: thanks! It'll be updated as soon as the queue is opened! (:

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 08/27/11 13:32
Chapter: A Moment of Peace

oh that was a good strory.well done. it was good for someone who is a beginner.I'm sorry to say it but i didn't think it was such a nice one till i read it today.and i realy want to read more.update soon. :D

Author's Response: thanks, it'll be updated as soon as the queue is opened (:

Reviewer: Liet Dumbledore
Date: 08/26/11 15:57
Chapter: A Moment of Peace

James is supposed to be Seeker. Remember the whole thing about how Harry's dad was a Seeker too?

Author's Response: That's just in the movies. JK specified that he's a Chaser.

Reviewer: azkaban14
Date: 08/25/11 9:37
Chapter: Back to the Beginning

It's so nice to see people exercising their talent with something like this :) Can't wait for the rest of it.

Author's Response: Thanks, that means a lot (:

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 08/23/11 18:36
Chapter: A Moment of Peace

Great chapter again. I forgot to tell you that my name is skylar too but I spell it with an a. :)

Author's Response: really! Skyler is just my writing name, I chose it because I think it's really pretty. I'm jealous that it's your real name (: and thanks!

Reviewer: harrypotterluvr27
Date: 08/23/11 18:07
Chapter: A Moment of Peace

such a good chapter.cant wait to read the rest.i really love this story and its only two chapters

Author's Response: Reviews like this really inspire authors to keep writing, I was afraid no one would read this story :3 Thank you! (:

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 08/21/11 21:00
Chapter: Back to the Beginning

Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter. I liked how changed it!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next one is waiting to be published (:

Reviewer: Liet Dumbledore
Date: 08/20/11 16:55
Chapter: Back to the Beginning


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Pottergirl33
Date: 08/20/11 14:19
Chapter: Back to the Beginning

I think that was very good. As for getting Wormtail in there, I think he was a good person who just got scared. So you could get him in there by kinda being a bit immature, but still a good friend. And if you don't want to do that metion how he is studying or something, but your right in saying who cares about him anyways. Well, good job, again.

Author's Response: Thank you (: First fic, so it's nice to get a positive review. I definitely agree with what you are saying about Wormtail, he was spineless but not necessarily a bad person. I just didn't see how he would add to the dynamic of the story, or at least not without really working at it. So I guess it's mostly my laziness that's cut him out, but maybe if I finish I can go back and edit him in to be more "politically correct," if you will. Thanks again!

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