Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 08/20/14 13:06
Chapter: Chapter 15: The Lost Servant

Finding so many new chapters after a long break from fan fics has just completed my summer! I love the development of the characters and the way you've encorporated Rowling's original events into your parallel storyline. Being that much closer to Voldemort's return has made the trio even more interesting. I looks forward to the end of this one, and the beginning of year four!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words and I hope you do enjoy future chapters. :)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/16/14 8:31
Chapter: Chapter 15: The Lost Servant

Fantastically fantastic! I love how these characters are evolving and how you've expertly weaved Lupin into the story as well!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I always liked Lupin as an unbiased father figure.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/02/14 22:05
Chapter: Chapter 14: Building Bridges

As always fantastically written!!

I'm so sorry cancer has invaded your family. My grandfather and father in law suffered from it. You and your family are in my thoughts and prayers.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your prayers and kind words. Things are going as well as can be expected. And, its nice to have people like you out there to extend a hand to a stranger like me. :)

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 05/25/13 4:02
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Call Of Their Own Kind

Well, I won't pretend that I wasn't shocked by much of what is happening. ;) But I do hope you continue to update, because I am looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Peridot
Date: 04/15/13 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part Two

Update!! Please! Or at least put in your profile if you are planing to continue or not. Love the story, by the way

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/19/12 19:27
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part Two

Fantastically brilliant as always!

Reviewer: divadime
Date: 11/19/12 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part Two

This story continues to be an excellent example of originality/creativity and character complexity and development while never losing the ability to continue to draw us in. I eagerly anticipate each new chapter, and I believe the work you produce is accomplished and exemplary. Thank you for sharing your skill with the world, please keep up the great work :)

Reviewer: annangel
Date: 10/07/12 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part One

I love the story, it's really good!!! Please keep writing! These long waits are killing me!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/28/12 18:27
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part One

Fantastic as always!

Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 05/05/12 20:14
Chapter: Chapter 8: Nighttime Flying

This story keeps getting better and better! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/04/12 17:33
Chapter: Chapter 8: Nighttime Flying

brilliant as always!

Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 04/01/12 20:26
Chapter: Chapter 7: Childhood Is Calling

Can't wait to see what happens with Sal and Destiny! I love the way you have written this story without really changing any of the events in the book. It's so great and I cannot wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 03/13/12 3:22
Chapter: Chapter 7: Childhood Is Calling

WOW! On every level possible WOW!! Can't wait for Severus to find out what the real deal with the boy was and WOW! Love silver in this chapter! The depth and complexity of your characters is amazing! Love it!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 02/24/12 2:01
Chapter: Chapter 6: Scales, Feathers, and Fur

This is probably one of your best chapters to date! I was mesmerized!! Great job!

Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 02/04/12 23:32
Chapter: Chapter 5: Hated and Neglected

Finally found some time to read the latest two chapters, and they're just as amazing as ever. Wizard's truth or dare would be seriously amazing, and I'm glad we found out a bit more about Drake. There hasn't been something random about Snape for a while though, I still crack up laughing thinking about him with cookies!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 01/17/12 23:41
Chapter: Chapter 5: Hated and Neglected

I really like Drake! All the characters are great and I love how you have evolved them all!! It's a process that shows no sign of ending and that keeps me tuned in to see what's next!!! Great job!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 12/29/11 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 4: The Heart Matters

Great! Love it! And I love someone finally pointing out that Ron and to an extent Harry can be as prejudice as the others!!

Author's Response: I'm glad that I'm not the only one who wanted that to be pointed out. I wasn't sure if people would like that, but I thought it was truthful. Plus, I wanted to have a moment when Hermione said, "Oh, honestly ..." :)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/27/11 7:08
Chapter: Chapter 3: Allies or Friends

Excellent and awesome as always!!! Love this look into boggarts of slytherins!!!!

Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 10/16/11 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Heirs Return

I suppose we can forgive the time length due to 9000 words of an amazing story. ;)
I was sort of hoping that it would be Snape who picked them up from the orphanage, but I think it worked better with Dumbledore, and I found it very amusing to picture Salazer obeying orders and heaving crates of drink around all day.

Author's Response: Glad you like. :) The trio will be heading into the Chamber of Secrets next chapter so stay tuned in.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/16/11 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Heirs Return

Have I said I loved this series yet? I LOVE THIS SERIES! I'm am sorry that Gara died though! Can't wait for more!!

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