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Name: SilverDoe_IsoBell (Signed) · Date: 02/11/13 12:10 · For: One-Shot
A really great concept for a story, as I love Remus & Tonks but have never read any based around their deaths before. I'd be happy to beta for you anytime!


Name: LoonyLupin (Signed) · Date: 02/14/12 23:57 · For: One-Shot
That struck all the right emotional chords. They're my favorite out of the main couples, and I'm glad they got to say goodbye. Sounds like they went to a better place after all :) Aw.


Name: Majnoona (Signed) · Date: 10/16/11 18:59 · For: One-Shot
I liked how you wrote the story that we don't quite know much about, which is how Remus and Tonks actually died. The story flowed very smoothly, and I did like the afterlife scene with the reunion.

However, I did find the ending a bit cheesy. There just seemed to be too many "I love you"s being spewed out that it seemed to get a bit redundant as I kept reading.

But overall, it was well-written with good grammar and spelling. Nice work! :)


Name: Dragonair0319 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/11 14:53 · For: One-Shot
cool! I love the idea of you mentioning James,Lily,siruis,dumbledore,and Tonks and Lupin in heaven....(afterlife)

Author's Response: Thank you! I tweaked the afterlife to get it just right, and I'm quite pleased it's gone over so well!


Name: LittleJM (Signed) · Date: 08/31/11 21:43 · For: One-Shot
I have to say - I am very interested in stories that look at Remus/Tonks or some of the other supporting storylines in DH. I like how you initially had Tonks make the decision to stay behind for her son; I think it shows how she wasn't just this young, spunky girl, but a mother. Then, of course, having her leave for Remus is very much in character!
Some of the dialogue at the end made things feel a little rushed, which sometimes happens when there's a lot of character dialogue to add. Still, I really enjoyed reading this!

Author's Response: Thank you! The end was rushed, but part of that was building the setting of an intense battle, where there isn't time for a lot of situations.


Name: armagod679 (Signed) · Date: 08/26/11 10:50 · For: One-Shot
Very nice and sweet. Both Lupin and Tonks are believable, if a little more mushy than in the books. Then again, this is a romance, so they should be. I like your interpretation of the afterlife and Andromeda. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I tried my best to make it realistic, and it's good to know that my interpretation of the afterlife went over well!


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