Reviews For Jar of Hearts
Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 05/01/12 4:00
Chapter: Who Do You Think You Are?

Great story!!! I love it so much and I cannot wait to see if you write a full length fic! Bravo!

Reviewer: gryffindorgirl98
Date: 04/26/12 9:00
Chapter: Now You Want Me One More Time

Merlin, that was probably one of the BEST endings i have ever read.......it's so sad, yet it really strikes a chord with everyone.....

Reviewer: proud_to_be_a_muggle
Date: 11/17/11 2:51
Chapter: Who Do You Think You Are?

This was a wonderful story. I loved how I got to see a different side to both Hermione and Draco. Even if it was a little wordy at times, but the imagery was brilliant. This story might be my favorite out of everything I've read. It is a combination of everything I love about romance stories. Thanks for making it canon, it makes me think deeper into what might have been going on for real in the books. I usually go for the sappy endings with the princess marrying the prince but you really explained this so well and kept to Hermione and Draco's characters and put so much emotion into this story that I think I like it better this way. So sad, and real. But Anyways Loved It! =)

Author's Response: Wow - that's so kind of you! I personally prefer writing within canon as it's interesting to explore what might have happened between the lines (though I definitely don't think Hermione did really have a secret affair with Draco in HBP). I'm glad that you felt that it fit within canon nicely! Again, I prefer writing the sad or bittersweet endings rather than happy endings - especially for this pairing as I find it hard to believe them living happily ever after. Thank you for your kind review!

Reviewer: ginny529
Date: 10/26/11 6:55
Chapter: Who Do You Think You Are?

That was so good! You made me want them to be together! Sad ending, I was so upset!

Author's Response: Aw, sorry - but I'm glad you enjoyed it! As I was writing it, I almost wanted her to forgive him, but I wanted to stay as true to Hermione as possible (considering the ship) and I didn't think she'd ever take him back after that. Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: guptadips
Date: 10/14/11 18:23
Chapter: Who Do You Think You Are?

beautiful fic... loved it :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :)

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 10/13/11 18:16
Chapter: Now You Want Me One More Time

Oh, how heartwrenching!!!!! But perfectly plotted out. I wouldn't have expected for Hermione to take him back- especially with the song's lyrics. I'm so sad, but the ending was exactly as it should have been. Quick- write something else!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Stef - I'm glad you liked it! As tempted as I was to let her forgive him, I thought that, considering all the lies, I couldn't do that and make it believable. The one-shot I'm working on next can be a companion to this and it should be up soon! Thanks for the review as always. Luv Alice

Reviewer: theystolemyheart
Date: 10/13/11 16:13
Chapter: Who Do You Think You Are?

Oh. My. God. I seriously started crying while reading this. So amazing, be proud!! I am completely obsessed with this. Words cannot convey. You capture Hermione's essence and intelligence so well...it's mind-boggling. Again, wonderful job with this, it's absolutely beautiful.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry for making you cry - but I hope you enjoyed it still. I'm glad you thought I managed to maintain characterisation - I was worried I was going to lose it a bit in the plot. Thank you so much for your kind review! I'm currently working on a one-shot that can work as a companion to this one - I couldn't quite let this story go!

Reviewer: PaigeeeLorrenn
Date: 09/26/11 13:58
Chapter: You Broke All Your Promises

Completely obsessed! Can't wait for chapter 3 :D Keep up the good work :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Chapter 3 is in the queue :)

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 09/26/11 9:39
Chapter: You Broke All Your Promises

What a beautiful chapter- their romance in the Room of Req was lovely. You describe Malfoy's internal struggles so deeply, and I like how you wound the story around the actual events of The Half Blood Prince. And I LOVE the song Jar of Hearts- wonderful job. I'm dying to know what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to make it a little bit canon compliant (as canon compliant as Dramione can be), hence including the events of HBP. Hopefully you wont have too long to wait - the last chapter's in the queue :)

Reviewer: giantsareforever
Date: 09/25/11 3:10
Chapter: You Broke All Your Promises

sooooooooo amazing i love this so much! cannot wait for the next update

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying it; the final chapter's in the queue at the moment :)

Reviewer: giantsareforever
Date: 09/08/11 0:52
Chapter: Now You Want Me One More Time

addicted already.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review - the next chapter's in the queue, so hopefully it'll be up soon!

Reviewer: LilyLunaPotter08
Date: 09/07/11 3:21
Chapter: Now You Want Me One More Time

i really love your story.. and i as well like the song, jar of hearts.. cant see the ending.. hope you're going to finish it !! and i also like you as an author :)
cant wait to see the ending...

you know i like HAPPY ENDINGS like fairytales... and please have an epilouge and/or prolouge... i wanna know what really REALLY happen before this.. :)

I love Draco in your story.. ohhh.. and MAN !!! i'd've been daydreaming since your story..

hope i'll get some response :)

HAPPY THINKING !!

Author's Response: It's a just a short 3-chapter fic, but I've finished all the chapters, so I will complete the story - don't worry! I was considering perhaps doing a longer version of this fic with the events leading up to their confrontation, but I'm currently working on a Scorpius/Rose fic, so maybe after that. I can't promise a happy ending I'm afraid, but you'll have see! Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: Monana
Date: 09/04/11 11:16
Chapter: Now You Want Me One More Time

I'm completely obsessed with your fanfic, it's great!! Very intense and I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm REALLY curious as to what will happen next!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) the next chapter's in the queue, so it should be up soon :)

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 09/03/11 15:12
Chapter: Now You Want Me One More Time

Wow- intense and dangerously sexy- just the way I like my Draco ;) Great job; looking forward to chapter 2!

Author's Response: Chapter 2 has been submitted - don't worry, there's much more of Draco being his dangerously sexy self :) Thanks for reviewing!

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