Reviews For Supergran!
Reviewer: Autumnroads
Date: 04/02/12 0:53
Chapter: Supergran!

Wonderful! Well thought out, and you have the characters perfectly portrayed. Thank you!

Reviewer: dancengirl
Date: 01/20/12 4:33
Chapter: Supergran!

awww!!!

Reviewer: maddyloveshp
Date: 10/23/11 23:14
Chapter: Supergran!

Haha, sorry I reviewed a while ago and i just recently saw your response. What I meant about the darker fanfics was not necessarily yours, just nice to have something make me laugh after sadder stories.

Author's Response:

Hello again maddyloveshp,

ah, I see. That clears that up *wink* There are a lot of dark fics kicking about, aren't there (I've even written one myself, and it's REALLY dark). I guess we HP fans just love our hurt/comfort reads. But it IS nice to get away from them now and again!

See ya,

M ;)

Reviewer: maddyloveshp
Date: 10/02/11 19:38
Chapter: Supergran!

Hilarious!! wonderful to read after other rather dark fan fics, if you catch my drift...

Author's Response:

Hello maddyloveshp,

glad to know you enjoyed it. And, er, sorry, but I don't really catch your drift. Do you mean other dark fics of mine ('cos I write a lot of humour fics, too, or dark fics of other authors?

Not that it's a bad thing either way - I'm just curious about the reference, that's all ;)

Kara's Aunty ;)

Reviewer: lady_of_the_mannor
Date: 09/21/11 18:02
Chapter: Supergran!

awwww.i love muggles too!!!small world!!! :D but i love neville more ^_^

Author's Response:

Hello lady_of_the_mannor,

oh, I love Neville more too! He's so bloody brilliant (always has been). Which is why IMO there really had to be a scene where Gran acknowledges that!

Thanks for R & R-ing,

Kara's Aunty ;)

Reviewer: georgeisholey
Date: 09/21/11 16:05
Chapter: Supergran!

Awww! That was a sweet ending... And clever of old Gran, too. :)

Author's Response:

Hello georgeisholey,

 glad you enjoyed Gran's clever vengeance. Neville's as lucky to have her as she is to have him, even if she can be a bit crusty at times!

 Thanks for R & R-ing,

Kara's Aunty ;)

Reviewer: Literally994
Date: 09/17/11 13:24
Chapter: Supergran!

I loved this! it's so funny! I can totally see this happening!

Author's Response:

Hello Literally994,

thanks very much. I am so pleased you enjoyed this wee glimpse into Neville and Augusta's lives, and that you enjoyed Granny Longbottom's wrath against Goyle Snr.

Imagine being daft enough to insult Augusta Longbottom or her family ... He won't be doing THAT again!

Thanks for R & R-ing,

Kara's Aunty ;)

Reviewer: Literally994
Date: 09/17/11 13:24
Chapter: Supergran!

I loved this! it's so funny! I can totally see this happening!

Author's Response:

Hello Literally994,

thanks very much. I am so pleased you enjoyed this wee glimpse into Neville and Augusta's lives, and that you enjoyed Granny Longbottom's wrath against Goyle Snr.

Imagine being daft enough to insult Augusta Longbottom or her family ... He won't be doing THAT again!

Thanks for R & R-ing,

Kara's Aunty ;)

Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 09/16/11 3:37
Chapter: Supergran!

This story certainly made me smile, and you really nailed Augusta's characterisation. This line in particular - "A rather foolish supposition on your part, don't you think? After all, they admitted you."

I think it was nice that you showed a rare moment of Augusta actually expressing her love for Neville... because clearly in canon he feels unloved and like he can never live up to her expectations, so it was different to see a bit of a tender moment between them.

I thought Augusta's spell was funny and original... although it did make me think a bit of the Imperius Curse... but I suppose it's harmless in this form.

It felt like a few times you overwrote a little bit... for example this line The elder Goyle turned crimson at the slur on both his offspring and himself. - You don't really need anything from "at the slur..." because you've just shown that situation.

It was a sweet story though and it brought a smile to my face.

~Katrina

Author's Response:

Hello Katrina,

 thanks very much for a well thought out and constructive review. The line you mentioned in particular is one that's been bothering me for days - I kept chopping and changing it, but in the end I grew so fed up I just left it as it was. But sometimes less is more, so I've whipped away everything from after the word 'slur'. And you're right: it does look better.

See? Your concrit in action! Thanks muchly for that.

It would have been so easy to depict Augusta and Neville's relationship as it is so oft implied in canon, and indeed writing it differently felt a bit ... strange. But I believe that despite all the comparisons to his his father, Augusta really did love her grandson for his own sake too. I'm delighted you liked the portrayal.

Imperius Curse, eh? Gosh, I never thought about that, though I can see why you might think it. Luckily. it's not a mind-controlling spell (not that Goyle Snr has much of a mind to control anyway), just something a grieving mother who abhors unnecessary violence concocted to make life difficult for the kind of thugs that destroyed her son and daughter-in-law ;)

I really appreciate the fact that you took the time not only to read, but to review too. It's always helpful to get some good constructive criticism.

Thanks again,

M ;)

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