Reviews For Second Guesses
Reviewer: snivellus_
Date: 01/01/13 18:16
Chapter: Some Horrible Dream

This story is amazing! This chapter made me cry so much haha D':

Reviewer: Phoebe Silver
Date: 09/01/12 16:05
Chapter: And Then?

I liked it. Really did. Good job.

Reviewer: IBelieveInNargles_Luna4ever
Date: 06/25/12 20:50
Chapter: The Oven is Full of Pans

Just got to the end.
Wow.
That had enough Neville/Luna to convince me that they really weren't meant to be together (I've been slightly shipping them for a while) and you ended it and made it cannon brilliantly.
Excuse me while I go read the rest of your fan fics XD

Reviewer: IBelieveInNargles_Luna4ever
Date: 06/25/12 19:00
Chapter: An Exemplary Friend

I've read some other fan fics with Luna in, and none of them have got Luna right, you know, sounding like Luna-it's actually like reading something J.K.Rowling wrote, congrats!

Reviewer: HanCourtney
Date: 06/14/12 10:04
Chapter: The Oven is Full of Pans

this was PERFECT!!!!! you are an excellent writer! you captured the characters perfectly! i was so heartbroken when they broke up for good.... but you wrote the end of the story perfectly! i loved it! going to check out alllll of your fan fictions now =D

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall
Date: 06/08/12 6:58
Chapter: Proofs

Merlin's buggered arse? LMAO!!!

Author's Response: One of my favourite wizard swears.

Reviewer: mumbleville
Date: 06/04/12 20:09
Chapter: Principles

This story is really wonderful! You've capture Neville, Luna and the others perfectly. I'm amazed at your creative names for potions and plants (it's really tough, for me at least)! I can't wait to read the many other chapters, but I wanted to leave a review now so I can sort my thoughts out properly later. Thank you for writing this! ^^

Reviewer: leckleck
Date: 04/25/12 3:43
Chapter: An Exemplary Friend

You capture Luna so well! Beautiful story, out of the two chapters I've read so far! Not a single flaw at all in your writing, wow.

Reviewer: Will Silver
Date: 03/26/12 5:11
Chapter: The Oven is Full of Pans

Amazing job! Very pleased with the twists and surprising turns of this marvilous books!

Reviewer: Gryffindors_Sword
Date: 03/15/12 22:07
Chapter: And Then?

Loved it! I would have reviewed the other chapters, too, but didn't feel like writing 18 reviews...Anyway, I was thinking that Neville and Luna would get together in this one in the end, but I like the way it worked out :)

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 03/07/12 3:17
Chapter: Snowfall

This story is absolutely adorable. And your characterization of Neville and Luna is just perfect. I rarely find any romance fic believable if it didn't already explicitly happen in canon, but you do such justice to J.K. Rowling's characters that it feels right. Can't wait to see where it goes next!

Reviewer: silverdoe98
Date: 03/04/12 13:54
Chapter: And Then?

one word: aaaaawwwwweeeeee!
amazing, you have a gift!

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 03/04/12 3:49
Chapter: And Then?

NIcely achieved, the resolution of Neville and Luna. Just the right touch of angst and reality. I have enjoyed the story very much.

Reviewer: Sunset_Gazer
Date: 03/03/12 22:44
Chapter: And Then?

I've just finished reading the whole story, and I absolutely loved it! Very well written and realistic, and so sad too! One of my favourites stories, thank you so much for sharing it with us!

-Sunset.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 03/03/12 18:00
Chapter: And Then?

I LOVE THIS!! Fantastic! I'm sad it's ended but a great ending!! Just amazing!! Well done! Did I say I love this? I LOVE THIS!!

Reviewer: Queen_Vee
Date: 03/02/12 17:59
Chapter: And Then?

Favorite
story Ever!!!!

Reviewer: PeppermintToads
Date: 03/02/12 2:28
Chapter: And Then?

Wow. I started reading this when the first chapter came out. I followed it all the way through, looking for it before any other stories that I was currently waiting on the next chapter for. It's really well written and I've loved it all the way. The characters were believable and likeable. I loved the ending--great job!

Author's Response: I am incredibly flattered and touched that you've been reading this since the beginning, and followed it so closely. This has made my day. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 03/01/12 3:51
Chapter: Principles

You REALLY get Luna...her dialogue has just the right touch of the misty, sing-song rhythm Evana Lynch provides in her portrayal of our movie-Luna! Nicely done!

Reviewer: ljlove
Date: 02/26/12 18:36
Chapter: Some Horrible Dream

i've really enjoyed this story so far i love neville! is that the last chapter though its so sad!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 02/25/12 20:54
Chapter: Some Horrible Dream

That was brilliant! Well done!! Love it! and I've gone through every emotion reading it that Neville went through living it!

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