Reviews For Polyjuice Puzzle
Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 03/07/12 15:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

i read the second one (love potion lessons) first and that was soo funny, this one too is soooooo finny. i loved it laughing the whole time. really well done =)

Reviewer: arya575
Date: 12/26/11 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

hilarious !!!!!!!!!!! luved it, !

Reviewer: Snidgetgirl
Date: 12/19/11 1:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ahhhh, that was great! I loved the ending with Ginny. Priceless.

Reviewer: GinnyPottterGranger
Date: 11/28/11 3:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

now that i read this, i think it's safe to say that they deserved what happened to them in love potion lessons :)

Reviewer: GinnyRider
Date: 11/19/11 15:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

this was really good, made me laugh loads, I agree with armagod679, you should do one about the love potion!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have just submitted the next one: 'Love Potion Lessons', so hopefully it'll be approved soon :)

Reviewer: Evora
Date: 11/10/11 2:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, I wonder what’s up with today because it seems as though I’m having a laugh at every fic I come across. This was really funny, especially the scenes at the end.

Harry and Ron here were great. I loved how you wrote their friendship. They’re admiration of each other wasn’t as awkward as I thought it would be. When someone says to a person who have lost his whole family to a war that they want their life, it would just go downhill from there. But not with Ron and Harry”no, they understood each other. It wasn’t meant to be sour, just curiosity. And really, it was so them to go into a crazy idea that they didn’t think much of. They just dived in, head first. I also liked how they both admired each other in the hard work they do. It was sweet of Harry to realize how much it cost Ron to help the joke shop. It was heartbreaking when you wrote George. I loved how you didn’t write much of it. You kept it simple and elegant. I believe in ‘less is more,’ and you got that down great. I really liked where Ron also admired Hermione through seeing how the other girls act. I thought it was fantastic of you to incorporate Hermione into the scene. It showed how much Ron values her, and how deep she’s in his life.

How very ingenious (and cruel) of you to put Ron into a very awkward situation, especially one that he most definitely did not want to know. I was already laughing full out when he thought Harry and Ginny’s relationship was confined to holding hands and heated snogs. How awful to know that it went way beyond that. Dreadful, but hilarious. It was so very Ron to assume the most innocent of things when it comes to his sister, and I’m glad you put that in. He did make it clear to Harry back in Sixth Year that he’ll be watching them, but to see that he still holds that up in their 20’s? It has ‘tactful’ Ron stamped into it.

I also liked your characterization of Hermione. When she described the boys as hopeless, I imagined her talking in a fond tone one would usually reserve for children. A bit condescending, but I think it comes with being a know-it-all and flaunting it. Ginny’s reaction was brilliant. That is all I have to say about it. It was a perfect reaction to her character.

All in all, I loved how you wrote their relationships to each other. It was honest and simple. I enjoyed reading it, so thanks for writing it! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review, it was so lovely to read! I've only just started writing fan fiction, so it's really great to get such amazing encouragement. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, I enjoyed writing it immensely!

Reviewer: FwooperFeathers
Date: 10/30/11 20:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Haha, I do love humor fics :)
I find it amusing how you made the ending turn out.

Reviewer: snidget76
Date: 10/25/11 20:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really good. I loved it.

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 10/25/11 20:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Well done. A really fun story to read.

Reviewer: hestiajones
Date: 10/25/11 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hahaha! This was a like a breath of fresh air. I needed the laughter after a hard day's work.

I do have some crit. There is this line where you say:

“If there’s anything you need, we’re right here,” called Tamora Andronica, the only girl who’d ever chosen Neville Longbottom as her ‘Hogwarts Hero’ date.

As the scene is told from Ron's POV, I was wondering how he could know.

That's it, really. The part with Ginny really made me giggle. Thanks for writing! I am going to go and read your other fics. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! The bit you highlighted, I realise I didn't make quite clear, but I thought it would be something else Harry had told Ron, but didn't want to repeat myself too often. But thanks for the review!! :)

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 10/25/11 20:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

PLEASE DO THE SEQUEL WITH THE LOVE POTION!

Seriously, this was an excellent story. Both boys were perfectly in character and I could imagine them actually doing this. Very well done!

(Seriously want that sequel as well.)

Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I have been considering a sequel... with your encouragement, I think I might!

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