i am so sorry that its been soo long! poor lilly!!! it serves severs right for what he did!she better go back to black and tell him!i can NOT wait for more!!!
good story... are all the horcruxes the same? (locket, ring, diary, cup, diadem) and what are you gonna do to replace the ones that were made because of harry ex. nagini and harry
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, all those are the same. Voldemort didn't replace Harry as he never meant to make Harry in the first place, and about Nagini... she's just the same, too. Up until the moment when Lily is not killed, everything has been the same. So with Nagini... yeah, I just kept that the same, even if it's not completely logical. Thanks for the review!
DX sorry it took me so long to actuly read this.life has been.....yeah.anyways!i cant wait for the next one!!!ima little sad that they didnt find a horcurx in the orphanige yet&that black ran off...again
Author's Response: Haha, that's fine, don't worry about it :) Next one has been posted! (took me awhile, because, well.. life...) Yeah, Sirius may have been right about the orphanage... and the group's dynamic will be an ongoing struggle... ;) Thanks for reading & reviewing!
Dx it wont let me read it!!!
sorry it took me so long to r&r.ttheres this thing called life that always gets in my way.anyways!i cant wait to see what the next horcruxes are&what happens to wormtail!but i really think padfoot&snivelus need to become friends!excitedly awaiting more!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know whatcha mean! Sometimes I just want to drop out of school and write fanfic full time... that'd get me far ;) Thanks for continuing the read and review though, it means a lot!! Going to submit the next chapter right now!
it took me a bit to remeber what Fiedfyre was.but,its that curesed fire that the onne kid that Draco is friends with in HPDH right?anyways,i love ur writing and ur last repose to Bella being crazy made me giggle.i cant wait for more!i cant beleive no one eles is commenting though!for shame!well,ur faithful lady will always be here for feedbak! :D
Author's Response: Yep, I think it was Crabbe... Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm getting a better response on other sites, but I'm glad I have you on here, or... I'd feel neglected ;) Thanks again! Next chapter has been submitted!
:D so,how about the crazy lady Bellatrix? XD anyways,what role dose Draco have? or are you just putting him in there to keep the time line right? i was soooo happy when i saw you updated!icannot wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response: haha, yeah, she's... nuts. She'll come back later, but Draco doesn't really have a role, per se, he's just there, 'cause... Well, I needed a distraction so Sev could get the diary :P Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying my story! I will submit chapter 7 right now :)
oh no!please make him come back!poor lily!she's going to be helpless withot him!i really cant wait for more!
ooooo.dumbledor has gone dark on us! *gasp*
yes.im the kind of girls that reviews EVERY chapter.i cant help it.its just so good!
Author's Response: I love when people review every chapter :) Thanks and I'm glad you like it so much!!
oh my goodness! waited to read this till there were more chapters when i first saw this,but i gave up on waiting.this is soooo good! :D
Author's Response: haha thanks so much!! I've been submitting as fast as Ias possible, but the validation process can be a little slow :/ Thanks for the review, though! Glad you like it :)
Oh interesting! I never really realized that it would have been so possible for Dumbledore to unite the Hallows in this cirmcumstance. I wish it had been more of a struggle for him to find the ring; Voldemort would have lots of protection over it. Otherwise, well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I wanted to explore this, the whole Master of Death concept, and it will return, though much, much later on. Yes, that's a good point about the ring being too easily obtained... Thanks again, I'm glad you like it so far :)
Love this! This particular what-if situation had always been so fascinating to me. What if things hadn't happened that night as Jo had written them? I'm writing a story along the same premise as yours right now. Well, sort of. James dies, but both Harry and Lily live.
I'm looking forward to Severus being featured in your story, or at least that's who I'm assuming "the childhood friend who partly guilty" is. Snape is a part of my story as well, and there's a conversation in which his partial guilt in the matter is brought up. Such a poignant concept.
I also really like Sirius' character. Exactly how he would act. I wrote him in a very similar manner. I especially like the line “I’m gonna kill him,” Sirius said in a tone that suggested that whether he wanted to or not, it was just a fact. He was going to kill Peter. He had little choice in the matter." Very perfect. It's just in his nature. He's the one who has to do it.
In any case, really nice stuff! Looking forward to more. Check out my story if you want. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Severus pops up in chapter three I want to say... There's also a scene in my story where he admits to what he did. I'm writing it currently (around chapter 10) and an overall theme of this story is the guilt that so many people feel for what happened, and how so many people played a part in it. I love writing Sirius :) Thanks, I always try very hard with the characterization so it's good to hear I'm doing it right. Your story sounds interesting - I'm guessing she won't go on the Horcrux hunt as she has a child to raise (on her own - *tear* - I love James, even though I killed him), and I always enjoy a good AU! Thanks again for reading and for the review!