Reviewer: silverdoe98
Date: 05/27/12 16:26
Chapter: Chapter 5

that is one hell of a plot.......
brilliant though!

Reviewer: bellaphoenix
Date: 03/21/12 14:33
Chapter: Chapter 5

You really should write a sequel. I'm just dying for Hermione to see her!

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 01/16/12 2:34
Chapter: Chapter 5

Loved the epilogue and ending twist; 'twas wonderful to finish on a note of hope after the heartwrenching events previous.

Reviewer: DragonFlower90
Date: 12/06/11 9:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

omg! I loved this story very very much! I'd love to see a sequel! I actually have a good idea on how to go about writing it, but it would have to be your brilliant story though! Let me know if you'd like to. I really enjoyed reading this, and a few other of your fic as well. Cheers!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/30/11 18:55
Chapter: Chapter 5

Fantastic! I postively love the ending! I've got goosebumps!!

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 11/29/11 3:42
Chapter: Chapter 5

O.M.G. So glad they had a son, so glad that their grief brought them back together, to a love that has deepened through tragedy. Oh, please- Esmeralda? Could she be? I mean, Bee? Hope you'll be writing soon again!!!

Reviewer: stormygirl
Date: 11/28/11 18:19
Chapter: Chapter 5

Great story, but what an ending! It has left me wishing for a sequel. Could it be that Bee did not perish, but is still with us? You have left me able to come to my own conclusions. Thank you.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/20/11 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 4

I really like this alot! Especially that it's updated so frequently!! Great job!!

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 11/19/11 2:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! The tone is a far cry from CATATI, but you're still nailing it. I am so heartbroken about Bee, and I'm interested in how the plot will unfold. This last chapter- nice job with the aggressive, furious sex on the boat!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Stefanie! Haha! Ooh, thanks for saying I did a good job with the smut. I was wondering about that! No one's commented before you, so I thought I ffffailed! :D

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/18/11 6:39
Chapter: Chapter 3

Wow! Excellent!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/17/11 15:47
Chapter: Chapter 2

very good!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/13/11 16:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

I can't wait for more!!!!

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